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Fic: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 9

Jun 05, 2011 18:43

Title: It's Always Open Season On Princesses Part 9
Spoilers: Through Season 2
Word Count: 2090
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Dan Harmon owns all of it. Me-none.

AN: We're back to Jeff's POV here. Thank you AGAIN to everyone who is reading! I promise at some point Jeff and Annie might even interact here. Probably.

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supercapo June 6 2011, 02:55:30 UTC

Ugh! Damn you Shirley! Giving nice and motherly advice on how you think things should go down. And stupid Jeff you knew this would happen and you went for validation. Stupid stupid man. ANNIE IS GOING TO GET SOME SORT OF WEIRD ITALIAN VENEREAL DISEASE AND STOP SHAVING HER ARMPITS AND ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!!!

Okay... deep breath.

Alright. Now that I got that out.

As much as I hate what Shirley said to Jeff here. I adore how This is so deliciously, wonderfully in character for her. So easy to hear her voice saying the things you have her saying. Seriously, you kill my brain every time with how awesome you write things that I hate to see happening!

midtega June 6 2011, 03:20:12 UTC

Woah there supercapo. Calm down remember big picture and remember elsissnuffin can sooth you with another fic. Something about jump rope from our ficcy Friday conversation. But, anyway it will be good. Although if u think about it its karma for those angsty chapters in debate u put evryone through. Also, cheer up dude this is only the beginning.

supercapo June 6 2011, 03:40:42 UTC

Midtega, don't tell me what to do! I will slap that smug look right off your pointy face! And I never tortured people like this! It's inhumane! All I want is for things to be all rainbows and buttershine and happyness! Is that too much to ask!? Is it? Is it!?

Oh and elsiesnuffin, if you're reading this... Oh, am I not finished with you yet!

Keep doing this epic awesome fic exactly like you are because in all honesty I'm loving ever word of it!

midtega June 6 2011, 03:54:32 UTC

HEY MAN, I'M. SAYING TO BE PATIENT with elsiesnuffin and this version of jeff. Sure he's looking for reassurance with his decision but he will and I mean will turn around and realize he loves annie. And if that doesn't make sense. I WILL MAKE UR ASS SENSE. Oh, if u want facts well in debate there was the first front of the joel and hannah argument and if I do remember u pulled out of jeff and annie's attempted sexy time when he ran out of condoms and that lead to that degree argument. THAT WAS TORTURE!!!! This is a view of man learning to love a sweet girl or not. Elsiesnuffin, please back me up here.

elsiesnuffin June 6 2011, 04:01:33 UTC

Hombres- chill! While you are both making good points here, I am going to give the slight edge to supercapo. You see, now that debate is done, I don't have to be hypothetical about this anymore: you think this is torture? I havent even started with the torture yet.

Insert evil laugh here.---->_____________!!!!

supercapo June 6 2011, 04:03:08 UTC

LOL you win man. Seriously. You used my all time favorite Shirley line. You... you earned it.

( ... )

midtega June 6 2011, 04:19:58 UTC

Well supercapo lets take a page from ari gold and hug it out bitch. Although I hate entourage aside, yeah let's take a step back and appreciate that it always darkest before the dawn and a wise man once said, I'm a firm believer in earning your happy endings. Second elsiesnuffin, well I hope.ur happy first u take supercapo's side and then u promise torture, if u weren't a j/a writer I would of devised a pierce hawthorne mindgame, but I'm not rich so there. Also this a fight were fighting, cuz nearly caused me & supercapo to fight each other.

elsiesnuffin June 6 2011, 22:36:57 UTC

I've never gotten a capslocked. 'armpits' before, so... there that is. I knew you would be angry at Shirley after this. I'm so happy you felt like it was in character. The Jeff/Shirley dynamic is a tricky one and nobody ever writes it, so I was hella nervous. And I'm warning you right now that I'm a big fan of dramatic tension ( in case you hadn't already figured that out), so try not to pull you hair out ;) . Thanks for reading!

supercapo June 6 2011, 23:02:26 UTC

Yeah... first off I really hope that you know I was just joking around with my overly dramatic reaction... and I hope mitega does too.

And you like dramatic tension? Whaaaaaat? ;)

Seriously though, I don't think I said it well enough. You wrote Shirley absolutely perfectly (not just in this chapter but all throughout). She's an underused character so as much as I dislike what she said, I loved that you did it. I'm looking forward to every nerve wracking chapter of this fic.

elsiesnuffin June 6 2011, 23:11:54 UTC

I had actually figured that, yeah. Usually actual arguments have less adorable gifs.

midtega June 6 2011, 23:47:01 UTC

First off its midtega, but I like myself make mispelling mistakes and I hate to mispell.

Rambling aside, I figured you were joking with ur dramatics once I pulled ur favorite shirley quote. So like I said hugs. You know its hard to detect joking or sarcasm around the internet. I made that mistake too many times on twitter. So, yeah its all good supercapo, also I see there is a new time desk chapter. I will read and comment. Lol at a/n time travel is really hard.

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