Fic: I Only Get It For The Articles

[elsiesnuffin]

Title: I Only Get It For The Articles
Word Count: 6577
Rating: M
Summary: Troy brings 'Maxim'  to class and chaos ensues when he finds Annie's picture in its pages. 
Pairing: Jeff/Annie
AN: It makes no sense that 'Maxim' would include girls from community college in their college girl issue, so I apologize for that.  But there's smut, so WOO!

Comments

[teruel_a_witch]

AHJDGKSFJHY, WHOA, yeah, um, I think I just blacked out a little, it was one of the most GUH-worthy things I've read in ages *fans self* I just LOVED the intensity, the urgency of it, and the fact that it was Jeff's POV (yay, first Jeff POV from you) made it even hotter
Jeff hadn’t felt this out of control for a woman in a very long time.
“Annie,” he said in a low voice. He waited until she was looking up at him with those wide beautiful eyes that he had thought were so innocent. “Tell me this is what you wanted.“
Guh, hottest thing ever *melts into a poodle of goo*
Also, the little nuances you capture like his stomach tightening at mere suggestion she could be dressing for some guy Charlie, without ever voicing emotions is so telling and just a shot to the heart and just gah, I love me subtle shippiness <3

All the smutty goodness aside, loved the group banter in the beginning, it was so spot-on and hilarious and LOL everything to do with Chang.

What would be mood killing from anyone else was just another endearing Annie moment.
Aw, she is so freaking adorable ♥

And the ending ♥ Hee, so cute and sexy and hopeful and playful and bantery and so Jeff/Annie♥, all it all this just made me really happy, awesome beautiful intense fic, you continue to deliver, brava. And much thanks for the nice dreams I'll be having tonight ;D

[elsiesnuffin]

I'm so glad you liked this. It was my first real honest attempt at smut and I was majorly nervous. Also, serious bonus points to you for even noticing that this was my first Jeff POV. I was REALLY nervous about that.

On a completely unrelated note, if you were able to maybe beta something I'm working on now, that would be amazing and wonderful. Let me know.

[teruel_a_witch]

The first,wow, really? I though you were the expert just from your fist fic, as you wove all the adult bits so cleverly with the story making it not just gratuitous smut but showing their relationship development through it (my favourite touch was when you made clear they actually made lovefor the first time without actually spelling it).
And THIS story, hands down the scorch-iest one I read in the Community fandom, maybe it's not much speaking for this fandom because it has so little in the smutty department but I've also read tons of quality smut in Doctor Who fandom (we are speaking quadruple digits here,lol, they are prolific pervy bunch*says it with fondness*) and it's still up there with the hottest ones, so great job!

Also, serious bonus points to you for even noticing that this was my first Jeff POV.
Oh, I always notice that kind of stuff, probably because I always love getting into both character's heads and solve them like a puzzle, but I was especially curious about your Jeff because he kept being a mystery, since we only saw him through Annie's POV and could only judge about his motivations through external factors, and I was really excited that you finally let us get into his head, plus I tend to find smut through guy's POV is hotter, idk why, but there's that :)

Wow, I'm really flattered that you chose me, I would love to help you but I'm not sure what I can offer you as a beta because English is not my first language so I don't think I'm qualified to advise you on writing and I often don't understand references because I haven't grown up with those things surrounding me (like I actually honestly just watched Say Anything for the first time after I'd read your fanfic), but if you want honest opinion on characterization I can do that, I tend to notice the littlest details because I want everything to be perfect, but except one or two typos I'd never really found any faults with your fanfics. You must be really unsure about this one you are working on if you are asking for an outside eye since you've done so great so far without a beta. Anyway, tell me what kind of assistance you need and if I can help I will :)

[teruel_a_witch]

I probably should also mention that I do have experience with betaing fanfic, just not in English, so I dunno if the procedure is any different.
(and I kinda have an editor's eye, very meticulous and running analysis commentary in my brain that never completely shuts up to just let me mindlessly enjoy what I'm reading or watching but is useful to correct stuff, and what the hell, throw in an unfinished(so far) linguistic degree so words are my bread (or at least will be when I graduate*gg*)) So if you still want my help, I'm more than willing))