Dangerous Impulse, KKM, one-sided Wolfram/Yuuri

[elsie21]

Title: Dangerous Impulse
Author: elsie21
Characters/pairing: one-sided Wolfram/Yuuri
Rating: PG
Warnings: slight angst

Comments

[aefallen]

*smiles* I've been following your stories on stagesoflove! No wonder your username was familiar. *smiles* Also, your icons break my heart, as did this story. I love that you had Wolfram kiss Yuuri after declaring that he didn't want anyone else kissing Yuuri, and I just sob for Yuuri not kissing Wolfram back! I really like how you wrote Wolfram reacting after Yuuri didn't respond. It struck me as being realistic - because I can imagine Wolfram feeling intensely hurt as what he would see as a rejection, even if he pretends otherwise. Thank you so much for writing this, I really enjoyed it! *smiles* I would love to see this continued, because I want to see where you'll take this story! *smiles*

[elsie21]

Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you liked it (as well as have been following the stagesoflove challenge especially as this is my first time writing for KKM).

I tried to think of what might push Wolfram over the edge and I thought maybe it wouldn't really be anything terribly different, just that one last thing that makes him realize that he could lose the chance to be Yuuri's first kiss (which I'd assume would be true since I think Yuuri has said in 15 years he's not even had a girlfriend) - and that being impulsive as he can be, he might do something like that.

But then I had to think how Yuuri would react, realistically. I think he'd be in complete shock.

I'm so happy you think I've written Wolfram's reaction realistically. :)

Thank you again, so very much, and I think I do owe the two of them some sort of follow up to this.

[shaorankun]

=( your Avatar is sad
http://www.livejournal.com/userpic/41480427/4194289

=( *hugs wolf*

[aefallen]

It made me sad too!

*hugs Wolfram too*

[elsie21]

I know, but I thought it fit the way Wolfram felt.

It makes me want to hug him, too!

[shaorankun]

^_^
so much angst lately

[melodi_chan]

Awwww. :(

I like how you wrote this. ^^

*pokes Yuuri* :P

Nice ficcy. :D

[elsie21]

Thank you so much!

I think Yuuri might need a little more than poking at times. ;)

[melodi_chan]

Np. ;D

Yes, that he does.

*smacks him*

LOL.

JK.

*gets smacked by wolf* XD

[sasuko]

Oh my gosh! That was really amazing, really. I was drawn into the entire thing, and it just went on and on and on...and the next thing I knew, it reached the climax! I don't know how to describe it, other than being very, very engaging. I liked it lots for that reason.

While I'm normally the kind of person who likes fairytale endings, I have to say this ending seemed to go very naturally from the way the story was going, so much so that I'm kind of inclined to say that I liked even the ending. The way everything hung together so naturally was just amazing!

^^; Uh, I'll go collate my thoughts now. At any rate, thank you so much for sharing this!

[elsie21]

Thank you so very, very much!

I wanted to write a first kiss, but I thought that Yuuri's reaction wouldn't be exactly what Wolfram (or I, for that matter) wanted. So I may have to revisit the two of them again later on.

I normally prefer happy or hopeful endings, but the road to true love never runs smoothly.

Thank you so much for letting me know what you thought! :D

[ruby_dream]

Aww...That's so sad one...T__T Poor Wolf...

This is a nice fic! :D

[elsie21]

Thank you very much for commenting. I'm glad you liked it even if it wasn't quite the reaction Wolfram had hoped for.