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penguin88 March 25 2006, 12:04:14 UTC
Ha! I love it. Your fics are always so unique and clever. I love reading them because I can guarantee that the plot will be new and interesting and all of the characters in character. Also, the last lines are always wonderful. It's so nice to be looking through my f-list and to see something new by you. And I'm still maddeningly happy that I indirectly got you back into this fandom (and the 1x2 pairing)- you're brilliant with it! I loved the little comment about 69-ing by the way. Very clever :).

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sharona1x2 March 25 2006, 13:28:25 UTC
"There's that, too."

Hehehe. Who says Heero doesn't have a good sense of humor? ^______^ I enjoyed all of Heero's innuendos. I'm sure Duo subconsciously picked up on them, too, and the combination of that and Heero's sexy voice was enough to get an attraction started.

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merith March 25 2006, 13:47:43 UTC
very nicely done! you've nailed the attraction and interest, there are subtle hints at emotional attraction as well -- the pacing, the wallpaper, the not wanting to hang up on a wrong number call...

can't wait to read the next one! :)

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dysis March 25 2006, 19:05:18 UTC
*laugh* Gee, I wonder why? Heero's voice would be enough to make _anyone_ develop a craving for pizza, I think! I love the dry humour he shows in this - it so perfectly suits him.

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misanagi March 25 2006, 19:17:54 UTC
I really like this. Original and funny start. I'll be looking forward for the next one.

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