Apple of My Eye, Gundam Wing, for 7snogs

[elsie21]

Comments

[merith]

oh man... i have to say i just adore the way you've written this whole series. how heero and duo are just so heero and duo. i love the slow building to their relationship, leading to more... and yeah, i likes them apples too. ♥

[elsie21]

Thank you. =)

I needed a break from the angst I was dishing out to them in the other series, even if the light at the end of that tunnel isn't quite as far away for them anymore, so it was fun to work on something more light hearted.

[penguin88]

I, to be very honest, have been a very bad person lately. I forgot to feed my dog yesterday, I have been generally cranky, I have thought bad thoughts about my fellow drivers, and most importantly I have been neglecting to review this series which I have fallen in love with. Heero and Duo are both perfectly in character throughout, which makes it a real joy to read. Duo is my favorite character in the series, and it always makes me smile when an author just gets him. Your Duo is rather silly (think face painting...) but he is never predictable or stupid. He probably makes mistakes like all other people, but no more than what is expected.

Heero is also wonderful to read. He is quiet, but not rude, and sort of unsure of his relationships without being under-confident in himself. I love him making the Easter Egg basket just because he wants to, even though it isn't something that is required for the holiday. He is a deep guy and that is most enjoyable to find. So thank you for making believable characters

[elsie21]

Thank you so very much. Your feedback is always so well thought out and specific, it makes my day to get an e-mail alert indicating you've commented on something I've written.

I'm really happy that you enjoyed the series and found them in character. I'd originally not planned to connect them, but when I wrote the first two, they seemed to flow together, and I thought I might have more fun pacing the seven challenges as a series in an attempt to further their relationship. I enjoyed writing it and am so pleased you liked it. Thank you so much for letting me know what you thought, and I do have plans to finish that other series; I'm just not sure when. I think I see about two more parts for that one.

Thanks again! =)

[bleedtoblue]

This was terrific.

[elsie21]

Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it. =)

[dysis]

Oh, that was so sweet. *cuddles them* (Though I think Heero might disagree that Duo's last line indicated that he was taking _pity_ on him ... I rather think that he'd find it even more confusing than the kiss. Or at least, not much of an explanation of it.) They're just so cute in this - I love it. :)

[elsie21]

I could so clearly picture Heero's further confusion at Duo's "attempt" to explain things to him. =)

I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you!

[hostilecrayon]

Awww, apples. ^.^ Something tells me Duo is going to get all his apples. ^.~ I've really enjoyed this series and I look forward to more from you!

[elsie21]

Thank you. I'm so pleased you liked it, and I can't promise a lot more for the GW fandom, but I do still have that series to finish and a short five piece stagesoflove challenge I've committed to working on with Heero and Duo. =)