It Blossomed Late in Spring, KKM, Yuuri/Wolfram

[elsie21]

Title: It Blossomed Late in Spring
Author: elsie21
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou
Characters/pairing: Yuuri/Wolfram
Rating: NC17
Genre: Drama, Romance
Final word count: 10,540
Warnings: mild angst, lemonish content
Notes: Written for the contest on kkm_wolframfans, takes place post series.

Comments

[evercool]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

XD;;;;; It was amazing dear! And I thought it was just going to be about the wedding but then I remembered seeing the rating.... LOL. Okay let's separate the smex and the rest of it while I talk.

The intro, the whole part leading up to the wedding and wedding night whatnot- I loved it. You make them both so IC... and you even made me nervous, LOL. Building up, calming/resolving, building up, calming, building up, calming, building up...! And the flow wasn't disrupted at all, don't worry. It all flowed very smoothly and it was really interesting and intense *.* All mixes of humor/romance/drama/angst were all blended well with each other.

And now the smex ... XD I'm so happy with what you did. You didn't make it all foofoo perfect and romance novelish like most people do. God I hate that >__>; The way you did it realy

[_miyuchan_]

Ok Ok I admit I was surprised, I didn't expect the ff being about their marriage *_* I felt like "eeeeh??" at the beginning...so i was almost hoping you would explain what happened before^O

[keikai]

...

What a rush! Did I say your last story was beautiful? You've seriously outdone yourself with this one, I love it.

To find a story that takes a realistic view on how their relationship progresses is rare enough, but to have one that makes the characters so IC I can feel them interacting, see them as if they were in the anime itself, is just -- I've been waiting a long time to read a fic like this, let's just say that

[penguin88]

That was certainly a lovely treat to read. I love Yuuri in this piece - he is very true to form. In a lot of fanfiction, he seems to magically turn gay and in love with Wolfram. I like your fanfiction because it shows a process or an evolution of their relationship. The sex scene was perfect for these characters - it was awkward and somewhat uncomfortable with a loving end result. Yuuri's naivety about gay sex is also quite charming in a Yuuri way. Also, the involvement of all of the other characters was nice to see. I especially like the scenes with Celi - the scene where she is picking out his clothes is very sweet. Poor Yuuri - what do you do when your mother-in-law is a total babe who is helping you get dressed? Why blunder about, of course!
So thank you for using your wonderful talent to once again create an awesome fic (and a long one XD). Good luck with your future writing.

[shaorankun]

that was long
@_@

you defiled shori *cries*

haha XD *gets hit*

^_^

YUURAM!!