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ella_rose88 December 28 2012, 21:35:44 UTC
This was just.... I have no words! Really, this is just amazing! I just love how much Gwen is involved within this fic and her support of Arthur is very in-character for her. It's a pity we didn't get that in the episode.

Also, I loved that you had Gwen confront Kara in this as well. It's understandable that Gwen would want to confront the woman who tried to kill her husband and killed many others. It's clear that Kara's beliefs and thinking is very much flawed (much like Morgana's). She wants revenge and doesn't see that her actions are wrong. Though, her cause is good, her way of going about it is wrong. Instead of killing and causing more pain and suffering, she could try and use her magic for good.

All in all, once again this chapter was perfect ♥!

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elsewhere87 January 3 2013, 05:17:17 UTC
I have very little words for beautiful feedback like this. Wow.

I'm glad Gwen's in character and putting her in more of the scenes is just a joy.

Yes, totally agree with everything you said about Kara. Well stated my friend.

Thank you. 5.12 needs editing, but is written and on its way. <3

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livviedoo December 28 2012, 21:47:39 UTC
I'm kind of staring at my keyboard trying to come up with something to write that isn't too fangrrly or pithy...and instead I'm just going to repeat what you've been told by so many others. As everything you write, this series is just perfection. As I'm still mourning the death of what could have been earlier this week, I tried to stay away from fic because it was too painful. But this series has b, een such a balm - and while I'm feeling angst and anxiety about what the next installment will be, I can't wait to read it (ahem - notice that I made a presumptive statement there about the next installment ;-)

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elsewhere87 January 3 2013, 05:20:40 UTC
Your words are so kind. I've loved writing this series and I tell you it simply started as a way for me to deal with what was missing and just adding to what we got. That it's enjoyed by people is lovely for me.

The next installment, 5.12, is on its way, but needs editing. There will be one for 5.13 too.

Thank you so much. <3

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kbrand5333 December 29 2012, 02:42:56 UTC
This is all the more heartbreaking because we know what's going to happen.

And, for my flippant comment, that I first said on fanpop after this episode aired: Apparently "Bros before Hos" is not a part of the code of the Knights of Camelot.

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elsewhere87 January 3 2013, 05:23:38 UTC
I know. Do you know how hard it's been to write for 5.12? I adore writing angst, but some of that one just...wow. I bet you were feeling the emotions too writing your wonderful story.

"Bros before Hos" ah that makes me think of my old show, One Tree Hill, lol. But yeah, didn't work for the knights did it.

Okay, 5.12 needs editing, but on its way. Thank you! <3

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kbrand5333 January 3 2013, 12:33:11 UTC
Oh, I know, trust me! Been waiting for 5.12!

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jesterlady December 29 2012, 04:06:15 UTC
Great pep talk from Gwen. She rocks the wisdom, she truly does. If only people would listen to her more.

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elsewhere87 January 3 2013, 05:24:46 UTC
So agree about Gwen. She's lovely to write. Thank you, 5.12 on its way, but needs editing. <3

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hope27 December 29 2012, 05:44:51 UTC
I'm not sure what to say except that this is brilliant and absolute poetry from beginning to end.

Gwen is beautiful and fierce in her role as queen and you showed that so well. I love the image of the scabbard and how at the end, they are both one, together. They shelter and protect each other.

Gorgeous. Gorgeous. Gorgeous.

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elsewhere87 January 3 2013, 05:26:44 UTC
Oh your comments floor me.

I love how Gwen is 'fierce' in her own way, right? I just love her uniqueness. It's so fun to write.

Yay, the scabbard image became such a big part of it.

5.12 on its way after editing. Thank you! <3

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