Comments | elsewhere87: Riding Stimulation

elsewhere87

Riding Stimulation

Aug 22, 2012 13:41

character: merlin/emrys, length: 1/2/3 parter, ✒writing: riding stimulation in private , mood: smut/adult, type: can./alt, mood: humor, character: arthur, time: future, mood: romance, ✍status: complete, character: guinevere

Comments 8

ella_rose88 August 22 2012, 23:00:46 UTC

Wow that was seriously hot! I admit I think Gwen had the right idea in how to convince Arthur to not go out riding with the knights.

Kudos to Gwen (and you for writing it)!

mara93 August 23 2012, 16:24:09 UTC

ah, thanks. Glad you liked it. A little different for me, but it was fun. :)

ella_rose88 August 23 2012, 22:35:16 UTC

It was but it still had the same lyrical quality all your fics have. I'm always in awe whenever I read your fics.

elsewhere87 August 24 2012, 06:08:44 UTC

Ah, thank you so much. :)

Hot damn woman! fabyenn August 23 2012, 00:04:53 UTC

“Arthur!” She slapped his hand away with a disapproving look to which he laughed and found her thigh again, taking lighter hold.

I like that they laugh in such intimate moments, it shows them being real with each other.

Enter it with each pulse. Go inside my King. Come inside and feel all the stimulation of your place of release.”

*fans herself*

He peered down into her lovely dark eyes, giving a shake of his head with a meaningful look. “Not at all. I know there will be more to come.”

“Right. With the knights.”

He grinned, slanting out of his mouth before he smiled wide as now the doors were opened and they were being announced. “And in our bedroom, my luscious Queen.”

I repeat, hot damn woman!

Re: Hot damn woman! mara93 August 23 2012, 16:27:19 UTC

'hot damn woman' is very nice, lol. I like that comment quite a bit.

This had so much of the roleplay dialogue and everything, had to inject humor into it. Just would have felt ridiculous I think to not have it. And it kind of just flows with A/G's relationship. Plus I love putting humor when I can.

Hee, I loved writing the ending line so I'm glad you liked that. I could just picture Arthur's cheeky grin.

Thanks. :)

sv_lilah August 29 2012, 04:30:18 UTC

Wow... I can only hope that married Arwen on the show is as epic as your married Arwen. This was... Thank god I didn't read this at work like I originally planned to. I'd have been blushing like a fool the entire time! By the way... I have to ask.... What was the spoiler? What did Colin say to inspire this masterpiece?

mara93 September 23 2012, 17:44:10 UTC

Hee, yeah it got a little naughty, probably not that safe for work.

I can't wait to see them on the show, with the later time slot, seems they might get more daring. More A/G love, actual romance in the bedroom or outside or wherever, lol, would be lovely.

Um, Colin just said how Gwen advises Arthur in some way or another that it's not good when he just rides off every time with his knights. He needs to stay in Camelot and actually rule the kingdom and hence...this fic. lol, thank you Colin and thanks to you!