Comments | elsewhere87: Shatter into the Hope of Tomorrow

elsewhere87

Shatter into the Hope of Tomorrow

Jan 01, 2012 19:56

character: agravaine, type: can./alt, character: leon, character: gwaine, type: scene extender, character: percival, character: merlin/emrys, ✒writing: shatter into...tomorrow, season: 4, mood: angst, ✍status: in progress, character: morgana, character: arthur, length: multi chapters, character: elyan, mood: multiple, character: guinevere

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hellokitty_tash January 2 2012, 05:01:20 UTC

This was beautifully written. And it was like you could feel Arthur's pain. I also loved the flashbacks. Both of them giving insight to the A/G relationship.

Great start and can't wait to see where this goes!

mara93 January 3 2012, 03:50:45 UTC

Ah, what lovely feedback to read. Emotions are one of my favorite things to write. I'm glad the flashbacks are adding to the story.

Thanks so much!

toya121 January 2 2012, 05:38:48 UTC

Wow this was a wonderful read... can't wait for part two!

mara93 January 3 2012, 03:52:27 UTC

Thank you! I'll try to update soon. :)

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mara93 January 3 2012, 03:55:22 UTC

lol, I have the hardest time writing summaries so I'm glad you liked this one. Eh, it was the part about Camelot 'lit ablaze' right? Fire, lol. I was thinking of you Piper when I wrote that.

Yeah, Gwen's coming. Glad the flashbacks are working.

Thanks!

mydoctortennant January 2 2012, 13:34:11 UTC

Maraaaaa! Why are you so amazing? It's not fairrrr *whines*

mara93 January 3 2012, 04:00:02 UTC

Ahhhh, Jen! I'm so excited that you're reading this! I love your writing so much so getting your fb is always awesome! thanks!

sallysparrow3 January 2 2012, 15:07:11 UTC

Beautiful start!

mara93 January 3 2012, 04:10:16 UTC

Thank you so much!