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herongale in elricmas

For Alpha: Trust

Dec 25, 2007 01:32

To: heiadenna
From: Santa
Request: Greed/Girl!Ed
Rating: NC-17
Title: Trust

( Even his Shield was failing him, thanks to the boy's devious alchemy, and Greed wondered as he barely managed to dodge another deadly arc of the boy's blade what it would feel like when it finally pierced him, when Greed would finally be hurt for real. )

Comments 7

somatosensation December 25 2007, 07:18:34 UTC

-flails- omf, I love it so much! That was totally hot! I really really like all of their interaction, and Greed was oh so awesome!

Thanks so much!

velvet_mace December 25 2007, 17:21:41 UTC

Greeds such a gentleman... sort of! A persistent, patient gentleman, who is willing to let Ed flail a bit. I love gung-ho Ed.

eli_artemisia December 25 2007, 23:48:09 UTC

I love the way you characterized Ed and Greed. They are both so amusing here. Really nice job!

Much Love,
Marysia

hieronymousb December 26 2007, 06:49:21 UTC

Nice! Hot and a bit plotty, at that. Although is Ed really going to talk to Al about "what it's like"? Haha. I like the idea of Greed actually surviving like this, since I was dismayed when he died in the series.

sky_dark December 27 2007, 02:46:36 UTC

"I wasn't born like this."

Greed stared blankly for a moment before he snickered quietly. "I think they call it puberty." <---internet winz.

Wow, I adored the Greed in this story, and all his glib one liners were major win. Plus it had hottnes and some plot, lovely!