Drabble

[sexkitten426]

Fiction: Hollow
Author: sexkitten426
Pairing: Ed/??, One-sided Elricest
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Ed's a bit OOC

Comments

[a_big_apple]

Sometimes drabbles as short as this seem kind of superfluous, and they don't say anything new, so why write them at all? But this one is like a poem--spare and simple, but captures a moment and a feeling really powerfully. Rock on, I loved it.

[sexkitten426]

Aww, thank you! Friends?

[rosi_doll]

Oh, darling, it's beautiful! D: So sad...

I think this is my favorite Al yet; he almost seems kinda bitter, but still sad. I really like that.

Thanks for sharing! ^^

[sexkitten426]

Nice to meet you! Thanks for the feedback.

[captain_hanzy]

Awesome, seriously, I wanna go down to Central and hug Al until he feels better!

Plus, I think this is the first drabble I have ever loved <333 Awesome sauce, sweety :D

[sexkitten426]

I think Al wants Ed to make him feel better, but I doubt he'd say no to hugs (or kittens, lol).

That is like, the highest praise I can imagine. Thank you!

[kokochan1]

I cried over this. I have some issues going on in my life that have me feeling lonely, and this struck a chord with me. Great job.

[sexkitten426]

Aww *hands tissues* I had no idea this would be powerful enough to move anyone to tears, actually. Would a Friend make you feel less lonely? Friends make me happy.

P.S.: You can call me Kitten (or whatever you want, really).

[kokochan1]

I think I'd like that. ^_^ And again, excellent writing.

[sexkitten426]

Thank you! I actually can't believe I'm still getting reviews about this a month after I posted it. ^^;