Hand in Hand; Part 11

[armor_of_guilt]

This is not a Hand in Hand update, nope... nuh-uh! It's not! Okay, yeah it is. ^^ It took me a lot longer than expected... and it was a lot more challenging despite it being one of my fave chapters so far. And it's long... very long... I'm wondering if I should break it up, but I just want to get it all out now. It's the only chapter that is

Comments

[meia_krane]

well dearie first of all my congrtas for putting one of the most traumatic chapter I've read on my life.

it lacks of hope, of hapiness, still has some warmess

tough at the end it's all bathed in agnst that just makes it wonderful

really wonderful, the descriotion the phrases how Al needs so desesperately Ed and backward

love & hugs

Mei- nee-chan =)

[armor_of_guilt]

I accomplished something!! Not sure if it's good since it's one of the most traumatic chapters you've ever read... but yay!
The whole plan was to lack of hope and happiness ^^;; So I'm glad you think so! I wanted the tenderness to be kind of sublte, since the main focus was the angst, but I really wanted to show their need for one another.
I'm so happy you liked it, onee-chan! Thank you!

-hugs-

[daniela_lynx]

Ouch. This is just painful... and now what is gonna happen to Al? Oh~noes, a cliffhanger... ;___;

Very well done ^^ I loved this chapter. Keep going!

[armor_of_guilt]

Painful, That's what I what aiming for ^^;;
And the ever lovable cliffhanger -sigh- They won't leave me alone... ><
Well, thank you for the comment! More will be up soon!

[darkxangel86]

woha! Angst. But I still love to read it. Yesterday I was thinkin "I wonder whats with Hand in Hand" and look! another chapter! yay! what a fanatstic way to start a day ^^ God those boys needs some happiness! *hugs the Elrics and you* ^^

[armor_of_guilt]

Well, the warning said angst, ne? -doublechecks warning- Yep! Glad you loved it, still!
Woah.. you sensed the posting of my chapter! That's awesome!!
I know they need their happiness, I must work on that ^^;;
-hugs- Thank you!!

[ssjkawaiitenshi]

I loved this chapter, so much detail. it was wonderful!

[armor_of_guilt]

Aw, thank you! ^w^ I tried to make it detailed without making it too boring or draggy. I'm happy you think so!

[box_of_doom]

aakhglkgsghasuogiksrhgsjtfhshlhtksejrthskerty

*dies*

Ed and Al need happy cuddling and fluff! STAT!!!!!

Please let them be save? and ok? and....

You wrote that well. It's agonizing (teh angst! It buuuuurnnnnnnsssssss!!!!) But you wrote it well. :P

I can't wait to see more!

[armor_of_guilt]

Random letters!!! o.O;; and death?! -pokes body-
Aaaah!! I'm a murderer!! ><;;

I know they need the fluff... they must get it soon. And the cuddling and love. They really need it. I'll see what I can do... -cowers from the ninja fangirls that might pop out-
Thank you ^^ I know it's angsty, but I'm still so glad you like it!
More will be on the way!

[box_of_doom]

*sits up and points* MURDERER!!!

...and those aren't random letters... they're..... ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........

okay, they're random letters. >.>

[armor_of_guilt]

ZOMBIE!!! O.O
AAAAAHHH!!!

Those darn random letters... ><;;