"Darling"- Chapter One, Part Two

Jul 14, 2006 13:04

Darling" Chapter One, Part Two
Title: Darling- Chapter One
Type: Romance/Drama
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Elricest
Warnings: OCs, uber-long chapters, one-sided love?
Summary: Ed asks Winry to marry him in four years, provided she isn't marry by then. Four years later, Ed returns to Resembool to fulfill that promise...and that is only the beginning...

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rowanandsakura July 14 2006, 19:25:57 UTC
Okie, will do! Only, um, how exactly do you do that? I'm not too adept with, um, computers...

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michirukaiou July 14 2006, 20:26:02 UTC
That shouldn't be necessary. Just check the tags. :)

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esteltinuviel July 14 2006, 18:04:45 UTC
I really like this one. I think I'll read it on ff.net and then read it again improved on here. But I love the story! Ed could never marry Winry anyway--he's madly in love with Al, after all...

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rowanandsakura July 14 2006, 19:30:40 UTC
Yay, I'm glad you like it! This was actually my first (and currently, er, only) Elricest I've ever written, but I'm very pleased with it. And yes, you're right- Ed could never, ever marry Winry, imo...and as for him being madly in love with Al... who told you?! (no, I'm joking...I did, after all, put this in the elricest comm...) This chapter is basically the same as when I originally wrote it, but I'm thinking of adding scenes in future chapters that aren't in the one on ff.net...so reading the improved version won't be in vain !

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frankie_the_cat July 18 2006, 01:17:14 UTC
Nice! I love your writing style! The dialogue is almost poetic, and makes the story very emotional. This story is very interesting too, I like how Ed and Winry both decided not to marry eachother. Cant wait to read the next chapters!

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