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frankie_the_cat in elricest

My New Fan-Fic!

Jul 14, 2006 06:56

Yay! A new fic! This fic took me FOREVER to write. I had bad writer's block. And this fic shouldnt have as much spelling errors as my last one *blush* I used a spell check site since I use wordpad. This one isn't as angsty as Taboo but I like the way it turned out. First in a multi-chapter, Hope you like ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fanfiction by author: frankie_the_cat, fanfiction by series: the soul alchemist, fanfiction by genre: angst

Comments 26

chrstphrl July 14 2006, 13:00:19 UTC

This is just wonderful. I can't wait for more.

frankie_the_cat July 14 2006, 20:20:16 UTC

Thank you! I'll try to post again soon!

ssjkawaiitenshi July 14 2006, 14:05:09 UTC

im more excited abuot this one than when you wrote Taboo... i think this one will be much better :)

Taboo was AWESOME though :)

frankie_the_cat July 14 2006, 20:21:10 UTC

I am too, I can't wait to write the rest of it. And thank you for thinking Taboo was awsome, I really appreciate it!

ssjkawaiitenshi July 14 2006, 22:52:22 UTC

this plot is so original too ! :)

esteltinuviel July 14 2006, 16:09:14 UTC

Alphonse had better not be dead! I couldn't take it if he was...

Anyway, love the new one, the writing is awesome. It's cool that you came up with a new apporach to things, stories that are original colplete with new events (stuff not from the anime, etc) are always interesting to read.

I can't wait for the next chapter, so keep up the good work!

frankie_the_cat July 14 2006, 20:23:23 UTC

I guess you'll just have to wait and see to find out what happened to Alphonse! ;)

Thanks for liking it! I tried to be more descriptive and use wording I don't usually use.

Thanks for commenting!

darkxangel86 July 14 2006, 16:48:28 UTC

wow...even better than the last one ^_^ great, love the style, awww Ed :(

frankie_the_cat July 14 2006, 20:24:56 UTC

Thanks! I like that you thought it was better than my last one, it makes me feel like I'm improving!

And your right, poor Ed! ;(
I felt so bad for him while I wrote this.

rowanandsakura July 14 2006, 19:58:12 UTC

I've not read Taboo (yet), but this is certainly very interesting! I whole-heartedly agree with Edward: Alphonse. Is. Not. Dead. I can feel it...and the fact that *all* they found was his arm makes me think that the rest of Al is walking around Amestris somewhere...er, probably not walking; more likely he's in danger. I'm willing to bet that Ed is going to rescue him eventually...well, I hope, anyway. Very good so far1 Yay, can't wait for more!

frankie_the_cat July 14 2006, 20:29:12 UTC

I would love it if you read taboo! It was my first fic and I'm very proud of it! Thanks for liking this fic, I'm really anxious to finish it.

I have most of the story already in my mind, and I think you'll all like where it goes. Keep reading to find out!

Thanks for the comment!