[fic] State of Mind - Chapter Seven

[elric_ward]

Reality was beckoning, but Ward was finding it difficult to drag himself out of sleep’s grasp. He had been dreaming of warm comfort and hands grooming his hair. It was such a lovely feeling, he didn’t want to leave it but the cold morning air was fluttering against his closed eyes. Sighing, he opened them and looked around. It was such a nice

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[deepgreen18]

Ooh, shiny new chapter! I don't understand why you have a problem writing Sting. Is he too random for you? He seemed very lucid in this section. Almost sane...except for the pack offer and his dead Hawkeye telling him to do stuff. I was surprised at his restraint, he seemed so eager to kill him at their first meeting and very hungry in this one. That Hawkeye must have been impressive to keep him in line post-mortem

[elric_ward]

I think he is just difficult and I spend a lot of time thinking about what he'd say, how he'd say it and reminding myself that he's a smug bastard sometimes, but not always D: too much thinking!

Yus! It is open season outside Amestris! They had better stay inside the park! :D

I see what you mean :D He is meant to be chatting just a little to himself