Carry Me Home

Jan 29, 2012 18:18



Disclaimer: I do not own Grey's Anatomy.

Author's Note: So I started this almost a year ago for the "proposal rewrite" challenge on the Callie-Arizona Community and never finished it.  In the hopes of getting back into the writing spirit and just for some fluffy-fun I decided to complete it.  I do hope you enjoy. 
Carry Me Home )

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brittlovesher January 30 2012, 04:35:50 UTC
Omg this is so amazing! :)

I loved the fight in the beginning and how Callie's remark could have been taken like the fact that she was rushing Arizona and if she didn't agree then that meant they were over... it was such a beautiful thing and how Callie just looks at the crib when Arizona leaves? Heartbreaking.

Hormonal Callie is funny, she definitely made me laugh. I love her rambling mess and how she accidentally tells Arizona about the ring and how Arizona realizes what is happening. Callie's speech is so flawless and it's so in character which is such an amazing thing. I love how she tells her that she's it for her, not Mark and she's all she needs. Arizona really needs that reassurance, I think even now.

Of course Arizona was going to say yes, how could she not?

This story is really amazingly beautiful :)

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ladyv85 January 30 2012, 05:20:35 UTC
Beautiful alternative! I like the idea of Callie proposing instead of Arizona...awesome writing :)

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i_fly_solo January 30 2012, 06:52:18 UTC
*Swoon* Okay, so I love this. It was just beautifully written, and the characters were perfectly true to themselves. The fight and immediate aftermath were heartbreakingly beautiful, and then the resolution was just adorable and sincere and made me tear up like the emotional basket case I seem to be lately. :) Yay!

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funkyshaz57 January 30 2012, 07:21:08 UTC
That was pretty freaking awesome. Tinges of sadness at times...but very realistic and ten times better than the Car Crash and the desperate Marry Me Arizona spoke

Yet, despite the change, Arizona expressed great disdain anytime Mark was mentioned. - Well certainly to be expected

And, Callie knew, she really couldn’t blame her. - And exactly right!

This never could have been an easy happy situation for anyone..Arizona had no-one and their relationship IMO was barely hanging on by a thread..So happy that now they seem to be stronger than ever..but such an awful period for Calzona

Arizona rushing from the room in tears was soooo sad

Callie's ramblings were absolutely adorable and totally Callie

And the ending was Super Awesome

Great Job!!

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