Supernatural fic - Five Time Sam and Jess made out, and the last time they didn't

Jun 07, 2006 02:59

For some reason, I was consumed by a het bunny. Tis Sam/Jess. Hugs and heartfelt thanks to lonelybrit and bethynyc for the insightful betas. *hugs ( Read more... )

sam/jess, supernatural fic, pre-series

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coiledsoul June 7 2006, 03:49:37 UTC
Oh! This made my heart her. Good stuff.

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eloise_bright June 7 2006, 22:28:03 UTC
Thank you! It did hurt a bit, especially the last one.

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tabaqui June 7 2006, 03:56:52 UTC
Ahhh, dude. Wow, i like that. I like seeing the boys from an outside perspective - very cool.

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eloise_bright June 7 2006, 22:29:01 UTC
Thank you! I liked that Jess saw little bits of Dean, but didn't know it. And Sam probably doesn't even realise it.

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tsuki_no_bara June 7 2006, 04:01:11 UTC
the last one gave me a chill. and the idea that sam has ac/dc (dean's music...) in his car made me giggle. (these are all hot and sweet and kind of sad in turns, but all of them believable.)

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eloise_bright June 7 2006, 22:30:31 UTC
Thank you. I knew one of them had to be Sam listening to Dean's music during sex. *g* I'm glad you found them believable.

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mel_b_angel June 7 2006, 04:37:27 UTC
I really liked this. It's all so sweet and sexy and lovely, and then bam ... we all feel that sense of impending doom ... really good work with these. :)

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eloise_bright June 7 2006, 22:32:07 UTC
Thanks. The last one came first, if you know what I mean *g* I began with the idea of Jess waiting for Sam to return, and it being the demon. And then I wanted to show snapshots of their relationship, and how Jess would see Dean in Sam and not realize it.

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sacrilicious June 7 2006, 06:06:44 UTC
Loved them all, and the ending was absolutely chilling!

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eloise_bright June 7 2006, 22:33:30 UTC
Thank you! I worked back from that image of the demon putting his finger to his lip and telling her to shh... I wondered what Jess was thinking as she waited for Sam to come home.

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