FF: Normal Asymptote

[elliestories]

Title: Normal Asymptote
Author: Ellie elliestories
Rating: R
Peter/Olivia
Spoilers:  "The Day We Died" (3.22), set in the possible future we saw there
Summary:  "The ability's there, whether you want it, or use it."

Comments

[mack_the_spoon]

Aw, I like this little glimpse of sweetness and development for them.

(Also, I was nervous to read this at first because I'm writing a fic with similar elements - but thankfully it goes in enough of a different direction, I think!)

[elliestories]

Thank you!

I can't wait to read your take on something similar! Frankly, I was rather surprised there hadn't already been more of something on the subject, because really, telekinesis? How do you just let that one happen? (Or maybe I just get really stuck on random points more often than I should.)

[namarie24]

This is lovely and sweet. Your Peter & Olivia voices are excellent.

[elliestories]

Thank you so much! I'm happy to hear they still felt in character while being a little sweeter than we ever see on the show.

[elliestories]

Thank you! Much as I enjoy reading something dark and dystopian, it's just not my style, and I needed something a little sweeter after that finale. Glad it struck the right note for you!

[sugangel7]

This is really gorgeous. You really captured that soft, easy intimacy and maturity of them as a married couple that I got from the finale. I really love this entire thing and will have to make this part of my personal canon for if the future we got in the finale had indeed happened

[elliestories]

Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad their relationship worked for you so well here, and that you enjoyed reading!

[melissa_pbfan]

This is beautiful and sweet. I love it. <3

[elliestories]

Thank you!