FF: Keep Going

[elliestories]

Title: Keep Going
Author: Ellie
Rating: PG13
Summary: “The old black phone still had a rotary dial, and he wondered if this antiquity served to prevent trembling, detoxing patients who weren’t supposed to be using it from making calls.”
Set sometime post “Merry Little Christmas,” ignoring the events of “Words and Deeds”

Comments

[prinnie868]

Aaww, that was just full of wonderful!!
Love the burrito/margarita story, hehehe!

Thanks for sharing that with us!
Prinnie

[elliestories]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[goddesspharo]

I liked this and the tiny attention to detail like the no-fly list comment and the lengths he'll go to in order to skip out on clinic duty. Nice job.

[elliestories]

I'm glad you appreciated all the little details.

Love the icon, BTW!

[crumpled_up]

Sweet. This was sweet. I love phone conversation fics. Loved the fantasies he had, too. Very entertaining. The little bits about Stacy were great. I forgot all about the no-fly list ordeal. :P

What I liked best was the blow job comment and this line:

Burritos and you.

For some odd reason, that was my favorite line. Great humor, wonderful conversation. I really enjoyed this. Thank you.

[elliestories]

I find it hard to forget the Baltimore thing, as I've never understood why they were flying for a two hour car trip. Logistically, completely nonsensical.

Glad you enjoyed it!

[ex_housecudd821]

Hee ! I liked House’s little fantasies, and the playfulness of their dialogue. Oh, and how you made ringing somone on an old rotary dial phone signify thoughtfulness towards the person being contacted. Makes the call more meaningful, especially in a rehab place. That was a nice touch.

Cheers, Jérémie

[elliestories]

Thank you! My grandmother still has an old rotary dial, and while using it over the holidays, it all seemed so measured and deliberate.

[elliejgirl]

This was nice. I loved his little fantasies about Cuddy in a bikini.

[elliestories]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!