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elliestories

FF: Muddle Through Somehow

Jan 03, 2007 23:43

Title: Muddle Through Somehow ( Read more... )

Comments 10

crumpled_up January 4 2007, 06:03:13 UTC

Yay another post MLC fic! I love reading the various kinds and when I saw you wrote one, I squealed with delight. :D

I love the way you write House and Cuddy's relationship. I love the caring tenderness between the two of them. It's just so beautiful to read.

only the wonderfulness that was Cuddy That line totally made my day. It put the biggest smile on my face.

The talk of their hypothetical kid was great comic relief. I wish that would've happened in the show. I also loved the part where House kissed Cuddy's palm. I felt a lovely fluttering feeling during that little exchange. What really got me was the out of tune piano. It just struck a chord in me that felt painful, broken and sad. I love it.

Excellent.

elliestories January 4 2007, 10:17:25 UTC

There's really very little that's sadder than an out of tune piano, and that imagery fit so perfectly here I had to use it.

Thanks for reading!

amaliak January 4 2007, 06:51:54 UTC

This is unbelievably sad. It's like...I can't even really describe it, but just very touching in a weird way.
Thanks for this.
cheers.
--Lex

elliestories January 4 2007, 10:18:29 UTC

The whole episode was so sad, I had to just take that and run with it. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

unifilar January 4 2007, 08:55:53 UTC

^^ Very 'aw'-worthy. And lovably deep in several parts. Like this one-

"And you’re….” Wilson trailed off, unsure of how to describe what Cuddy couldn’t herself.

The simple(or, in other cases, not-so simple) sentences like that are constructed so smartly that it helps set the mood and, in this case, characterize Cuddy. So cool. XD The whole fic is really emotional, realistic, and describing so wonderfully. I love how you not only describe the physical aspects of the situation- but the mental and emotional parts too. That gives the fic a very well-rounded feel.

The way you end it is very satisfying, and I just love it so much. ^^ I admire your writing skills.

elliestories January 4 2007, 10:19:30 UTC

Thank you so much! I was a bit apprehensive about the House-POV I used, as I wasn't quite sure if I got the feel right, but I'm very happy to know it worked so well for you :)

ex_housecudd821 January 5 2007, 06:19:11 UTC

This was lovely, particularly the bit about the organised chaos of House’s abode. If anybody could learn his “system”, it would be Cuddy.

Cheers, Jérémie

elliestories January 5 2007, 06:29:55 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

teresa_b_p February 13 2007, 20:22:39 UTC

WOW! This is one of my favourites... I'm not sure if I can choose one... I would choose them all for sure! Your fanfics rock! This one is so passionate! The way they talk, the way you write about the background of the scene... the piano almost made me cry... Everything... the only word that I found that can transmit what I fell about this is : beautiful! A simple but so emoticonal word... Just like your text! You never let us (readers)down! All we wait for... you give us two times better. Keep going that I'll keep reading.

Best wishes,
Teresa Barreto

elliestories February 14 2007, 22:14:15 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying my work!