Like Water

Oct 28, 2010 00:36

Title: Like Water 
Characters: Donghae/Kyuhyun
Author: Elliebear128
Rating: PG
Length: one-shot
Words: 472
Summary: This is what the end feels like.
Notes: This was my last written piece, dedicated to everyone who supported my love for kyuhae all this time~

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hyukhae4ever October 28 2010, 08:18:18 UTC
last?! what do you mean last?! why last?!
OMG!!!

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elliebear128 November 6 2010, 10:17:11 UTC
A bit of a bittersweet ending :)

Thanks for reading~ <3

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kyuhaexd November 9 2010, 13:25:45 UTC
WHAT DO YOU MEAN THE LAST?! you not going to write any kyuhae fic anymore??!?!! DDD:

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namikaze_jkc October 28 2010, 08:30:16 UTC
Why do I suddenly feel like crying? *heart sort of breaks at this* =((

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elliebear128 November 6 2010, 10:17:59 UTC
*glues heart back together*

Hey hun! *hugggg!*

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eter00 October 28 2010, 09:15:26 UTC
you stopped writing? why ;__; your stories were always so beautiful and well-written!

and this one... it's heartbreaking, but still... perfect for the inevitable ending ;__;

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elliebear128 November 6 2010, 10:19:03 UTC
Aw, thank you so much for the compliment!
I'm so glad to hear you've enjoyed my past works~
*hug*

<3

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madelyn93 October 28 2010, 12:44:16 UTC
oh sure, and your swan song has to be a heartbreaking piece ;A;
but i suppose it's for the best, because if you wrote a fluffy loveydovey fic, we would want more and more and then you can never leave D: are you still reading kyuhae though?

And Donghae closes his eyes, soaking in the torturous comfort of warm love and sterile betrayal. It's like thriving and choking at the same time, like this moment could stretch out far enough to wrap around them until the empty coldness disappears if only it didn't end up suffocating them first.
i do love this paragraph so very much. This is what the end feels like indeed.

*stares at own forgotten journal*

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elliebear128 November 6 2010, 10:21:50 UTC
Honestly, I'm pretty much out of the whole sj fandom...wow, I can't believe I actually said that!! I'm still running the kyuhae fanfic comm for now but I'm not so involved anymore T_T I guess rl has been a bit busy, same for you right? lol, that and too many diff fandoms, right? :DD

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lovetails October 28 2010, 12:44:24 UTC
oh? but why?
ur pretty good at this, so i'm guessing u'r going to be busy in the future u cant write
but dont delete them or anything okay? ^^

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elliebear128 November 6 2010, 10:23:15 UTC
Yeah, I'm just a little too busy and honestly I'm a bit out of the fandom now too :) I love what had inspired me to write up to this point so I'll definitely keep everything up for people :D

thank you!~

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