Piece of Mind

Apr 14, 2010 03:43


Title: Piece of Mind
Characters: Kyuhyun/Yesung
Author: ElmersGlue128
Rating: NC-17 (explicit sex)
Length: one-shot
Words: 3,755
Dedicated: to g_myzo, who requested this prompt ( here) literally a million years ago^^  Pretty sure you'd be ok with the rating, or else skip that part? *facepalms*
Summary: Kyuhyun and Yesung are strangers who live in the same ( Read more... )

kyuhyun/yesung, piece of mind

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yeonnie April 15 2010, 06:25:26 UTC
KYUSUNG!!!!!!!!!!
I. LOVE. YOU *fangirls over you forever*
This pairing is climbing up on my OTP list <333333 KYUSUNG <3333333333

I can't possibly tell you how much i love this and how much i love you for writing this. Actually, i read it last night, printed it and brought it to school, read it again during Literature (had all my friends staring at me) and forgot i was gonna have an Biology test the next period. If i fail, i blame you. YOU. Y.O.U!!!!!!! *sobsob*

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I somehow knew Kyu lived in that house. Oh God, the whole idea is creepy and brilliant. The feeling of déjà-vu was really well described, it just keeps the readers's eyes glued on the screen and makes them scroll down and down <3

“Really?” he asks confusedly, seriousness momentarily replacing the intense dread while he scratches his head, “Mine’s always really slow and confused.” - And people ask me why Yesung is so awesome xDDD

Gasping for the short spurts of obtainable air between his sinking fall under the darken depths beyond conscious reality that echoes with overlapping voices, yelling in angry arguments and unforgivable tones until the apologies become hollow words whispered against Kyuhyun’s ears - Love this!!!! Kyu's past relationship must be really abusive hah? Poor baby ):

THE SEX!!!!! THIS DESERVES CAPLOCK BECAUSE IT IS JUST AMAZING!!!!!
KYUSUNG SEX IS PURE SEX.
IT WAS SO HOT THAT I DIED AND REVIVED MYSELF TO READ IT AGAIN!!!!!
SMUT SHOULDN'T BE MAKING ME THIS EXCITED AND GIDDY!!!!! AGAIN, I BLAME YOU!!!!!

The mystery shrouds him, lures him in willingly and he grins - someone as weird as him - right before he falls asleep. I love weird, i love Yesung!!!! YAY!!!!

Smutty Kyusung is my new remedy for EVERYTHING! Gosh i don't care if i failed my Biology test. MEMMING THIS ♥

I'M JUST SO HIGH RIGHT NOW, AND THIS COMMENT IS LONG. PLEASE BARE WITH ME ^^~

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elliebear128 May 5 2010, 06:14:50 UTC
I. SERIOUSLY. LOVE. YOU. TOO.
YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS MAKE ME REALLY HAPPY AND LAUGH MY HEAD OFF, ESPECIALLY IF I'M IN A NOT SO GREAT MOOD...YOU ALWAYS ALWAYS MAKE ME FEEL BETTTTTER. ;DD

I have to admit, KyuSung is pretty nice but, for some reason, I'm always slightly a bit more bias towards KyuHae and then YeHae :DDDD

Better, question, how did you do on your biology test? :DD Maybe smut can help stimulate a student's mind beforehand so they can do better on tests. :DDDD This could totally be proven someday... :DDDD

Thank you~~~ *HUGS* :DDDD
P.S. I TOTALLY ADORE YOUR LONG COMMENTS! SO MUCH <333

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