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Breaking Out - Chapter One

Mar 22, 2006 17:38

Title: Breaking Out
Author: elleian
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17 (overall)
Warnings: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Fluff
Disclaimer: Unless otherwise stated, everything is owned by JK Rowling, Warner Brothers, etc. I do not make any money from this and I have no intent to infringe anyone’s copyright.
Summary: The fighting may be over, but the war ( Read more... )

fic: breaking out

Comments 34

icyaurora8 March 22 2006, 18:09:08 UTC

i'm really excited to see where this is going!! keep the chapters coming!

elleian March 22 2006, 18:47:02 UTC

:) Thank you! The next chapter will be up on Sunday.

facecat March 22 2006, 18:51:51 UTC

agreed.

elleian March 22 2006, 18:54:57 UTC

*grin*

strifechaos March 22 2006, 18:48:44 UTC

Oooh interesting. I haven't been following HP fics of late but this is different from what I use to find. I like the idea, and I'm sure you'll do a fantastic job with it. *grins* I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll take this story. *waves*

elleian March 22 2006, 18:54:41 UTC

I'm glad that you like it! *blush* I got stuck on the idea of the Ministry still interfering with Harry's life even after he had defeated Voldemort, and it just flowed from there. Hopefully it won't become too cliched!

And I must say I love your icon!

haltlos March 22 2006, 19:41:39 UTC

Harry's thought and feelings impressed me very much. You really made it feel natural and it is. All the things that've happened during the war scared and frustrated him. Very realistic for a post war scenario.
They're trapped now with each other - very interesting. Can't wait to read more. :)

elleian March 22 2006, 20:29:05 UTC

I'm glad that Harry's thoughts came across as natural. I got into his mindset as I was writing about just how frustrated and trapped and frightened he felt, even when he was supposedly so powerful and mighty. Even though people like his friends knew he was scared before the final battle with Voldemort, afterwards they couldn't see why he couldn't move on like they could. He feels as if he can't open up to anybody because they wouldn't understand even if he explained everything to them.

:) Thanks for your lovely comment!

naranga March 22 2006, 20:40:36 UTC

Yay. I like this a lot, and can't wait to see where it goes. There's certainly nothing wrong with angst, especially since it tends to naturally lead to some of the best fluff. Yay for H/C!

elleian March 22 2006, 20:58:13 UTC

That was my line of thinking when I started the angst! I can't bear unhappy endings but a bit of strife along the way never hurt anyone. :)

ladybelz March 22 2006, 20:55:23 UTC

You better continue this or I'm coming to find you and hurt you.

*Grin*

elleian March 22 2006, 20:59:47 UTC

You know, I wouldn't be so scared if the grin hadn't been there ... I can just picture this maniacal look ;) *holds up hands in surrender* I solemnly swear to write more!

ladybelz March 22 2006, 21:50:54 UTC

Bwahahahahahaha! I'm evil, I know lol.