Oct 25, 2006 18:36
I got a review on a really old account where I posted my poetry on fictionpress.com. And I went to read the poem that they'd reviewed and it was really good. Twas quite amazing and made my day. So I may try my hand at poetry again. Maybe I can win a scholarship or something. Here is the poem. (C) MOI.
-- Wine and Berries --
There is a sweet taste in my mouth
it tastes of wine and berries,
I can not find the words to speak
the sweet pain that they carry,
A wordless sound to hide the break
I know is in your voice,
It carries softly whispered things
best left to pasts of choice,
A cooling wind your breath expelled
a sense uncalled, proclaimed,
A world within you that is silence
a touch to be untamed,
A wild thing to brush like leaves
and rustle things unseen,
So brush across a golden carpet
in grasses where I've been.
copyright ME 2006