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You could have just told me (Germany, Italy)

Sep 15, 2010 23:15

Title: You could have just told me
Warnings: Sex, mild pain play
Characters: Italy, Germany
Summary: Germany is confused about his sexuality; Italy simplifies things.
Year: 1970's-present

( You could have just told me )

hetalia, kink, smut, fanfic, germany, italy

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Re: Oh, if you think it's bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 19 2010, 21:58:52 UTC

Whee, we're friends now! You're my first livejournal friend who isn't from real life. I probably won't really post much... I mostly lurk. But maybe I'll post something? I don't know yet.

And, uh, yeah. I totally understand about the writing porn thing. Because I write novels, and a critical plot point involved a lot of sex. That was an awkward book to write, but I had to do it. I mostly used the "fade to black", I'm embarrassed to say. Maybe when I flesh out the book I'll add some more of those scenes...

Same with my other book, which is supposed to at least have making out, and it sort of avoids even that much...

Oh no! I started writing about writing! If I don't stop myself now, I'll never stop!

And I'm glad that you post stuff. Please write more like this one! Because I'm a sucker for the sweet pairings (SuFin, GerIta, Giripan, and LietPol are my favorites), but I, well, like for the assumed uke to top. Or if they were switches more often, because that's more realistic...

...I don't think I can ramble on my porn preferences, actually. I'm going to turn really red if I continue that train of thought.

Reviews give every writer the warm fluffies, I think. <3 I'll try to comment more!

Re: Oh, if you think it's bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- ellamequiere September 19 2010, 23:33:42 UTC

Aww, I'm your first! Don't worry, I'll take care of you, baby... (Sorry, don't mean to make you blush more xD)

There's nothing wrong with NOT writing porn if you're not comfortable with it (particularly if you haven't had a lot of sex, which I get the feeling is true for you?) But, I'm glad you enjoy what I write, and thanks for delurking! <33

Re: Oh, if you think it's bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 19 2010, 23:54:26 UTC

How do you do that strike-through thing? Because I haven't figured that out yet... Hmmm... Which means that I can't reply to it in kind. (Otherwise I'd try to say something flirtatious in response. As though I've ever flirted...)

Well, it was an important plot point. Critical, really, to the concluding novel. So I ough to learn how. I just feel awkward writing about it.

Oh, no, actually. Since this is my not-attached-to-my-real-self account, I guess I can admit this... Ive been living with my boyfriend for about two and a half years now. I think? Hmmm, it was gradual, so it depends on how you count.

It's just that I don't really talk to people about sexual things...

Aaand now I'm embarrassed. >.<

Re: Oh, if you think it&#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- ellamequiere September 20 2010, 21:56:49 UTC

Strike through is the same as bold or italics, except instead of "i" or "b," you type "strike."

And don't worry, honey, I hear it comes real natural...

Re: Oh, if you think it&#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 21 2010, 01:16:37 UTC

えっ？ What comes real natural? Sex or flirtation? Because I get what you're saying, but I don't quite get what you're saying...?

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- ellamequiere September 21 2010, 01:51:32 UTC

I was talking about flirting; sex comes natural to some people, and not so much to other people, I think.

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 21 2010, 02:30:57 UTC

Well, who knows? Maybe I can try this flirting thing! Although I've never flirted before. I usually just go and tell someone straight out if I like them, so ive never needed to...

...I wonder whether this will make sense later. I'm starting to feel sick, so I can't tell what makes sense... (I thought I'd mention it in case this is baffling...)

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- ellamequiere September 21 2010, 02:41:56 UTC

I totally get when that happens. I myself fainted in the bathroom at work earlier today, and I have NO idea if anything I've written in the past five hours is coherent. Pleh.

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 21 2010, 02:45:16 UTC

Oh no! Please feel better soon! Fainting is so unpleasant... I really hope that you get well soon!

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;amp;amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- ellamequiere September 21 2010, 02:46:04 UTC

Thanks! And the same to you.

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;amp;amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 21 2010, 02:54:20 UTC

Oh, I'm not that sick. Just need rest and water, I think. So keep any luck and well wishes for yourself. お大事に！

Aw, drat, I'm slipping into Japanese. That's a sure sign that I need sleep...

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;amp;amp;amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- ellamequiere September 21 2010, 03:12:45 UTC

Mmk. Sleep well, honey.

Re: Oh, if you think it&amp;amp;amp;amp;#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 26 2010, 20:16:12 UTC

I hope that you slept well, too. I only just caught up on all my lost sleep... (I slept nearly twelve hours last night.) I've been so busy, though. Sorry I never really replied!

Re: Oh, if you think it&#39;s bad to comment on explicit yaoi-- moyakite September 21 2010, 01:17:04 UTC

Also, thank you for teaching me!

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