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ellamequiere

Along Came Alfred, The Sequel (France, England, America) - Pt 2

Sep 07, 2010 01:50

Title: Along Came Alfred, The Sequel
Warnings: Lots of sex
Summary: After his encounter with England and France at the most recent conference, Al decides to take France up on his invitation.
Characters: America, England, France
Year: Modern
Related fics: Along Came Alfred

Pt 1

( Part 2 )

france, hetalia, along came alfred, smut, america, england, fanfic

Comments 8

lovelycudy September 15 2010, 18:28:29 UTC

I've been following this in the meme and it's simply amazing. I love everything about it. You rock

nasty_show September 15 2010, 18:44:12 UTC

I am enjoying this story a lot. :D

rosyaristocracy September 16 2010, 01:30:23 UTC

Oh my. J'adore. ♥

caoirigh September 16 2010, 05:18:21 UTC

Bravo. Just- Bravo.

anonymous January 5 2011, 22:39:19 UTC

I have figured out why I love these threesomes of yours so much, even though I supposedly don't approve of threesomes. It is the DIALOGUE.
“These silly shirts he wears, it takes eons to divest him of them-- but if you, in the heat of passion, dare to--”

“No, Francis.”

“--rip them, he becomes very upset and threatens diplomatic retaliation--”

“Once--”

“--but not until after you make love to him,” finished France, satisfied.
ROFLMAO. How could you have those lines, those beautiful, beautiful lines, with two in the bed? You couldn't, that's what. And, having hated France in Duet and in general, I think that here I might love him. He makes me giggle manically, anyway. Yeah, I'm not really reading this in a sexual way. I'm just giggling.
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ellamequiere January 15 2011, 17:46:43 UTC

Hey, fair enough, read it for whatever you like. And you're right... particularly with FrUK dialogue, it adds a whole layer of hilariousness if someone else is listening xD.

Hated France in general? Do you mean, in my fics, or in general in general? I do remember you saying you're a GerIta girl...

anonymous January 26 2011, 22:17:08 UTC

Ooh, a question - I certainly don't hate real-life France, I hated him in canon because I always hate seductive males, feeling that they're trying to manipulate me, and I felt the same dislike for him in your fics, but in a 'well-written character who I dislike' way, not a 'character who I dislike because he's badly written' way. So that's good. And now I've come to appreciate his comedy-factor, and of course I was always grateful to him for acting as a 'catalyst' as you put it, and even though he was being a jerk in 'Duet' it makes it more interesting and fun to have characters that you hate, so you like the characters because you hate them, if that makes sense.

ellamequiere February 3 2011, 05:06:56 UTC

I definitely get the "liking characters because you hate them" phenomenon. It's also interesting that you say that you automatically distrust seductive men... I definitely hear where you're coming from (I often feel the same way in real life), but for some reason it's never bothered me in fiction. Actually, like lots of women (although admittedly most of them are straight), I think they're kind of fun. Go figure, right?