DBSK: Sweet Harmony #17 - Surprise Guest Vocal

Jun 26, 2008 22:44

Title: Surprise Guest Vocal
Series: Sweet Harmony #17
Rating: Explicit, only a little bit.
Pairing: Yoochun/Jaejoong

Author's Notes: I've revised this story, the link is below. But I'm keeping the entry here to preserve the comments.

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kallistei June 27 2008, 06:05:56 UTC
Ah, the eternal question of how these boys manage to be such dorks and yet totally hot at the same time. XD

Corrupting by Junsu should always be encouraged. ♥

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elizacake June 29 2008, 03:38:33 UTC
They are in perfect balance. Although I think the dorkitude was a defence mechanism against overwhelming hotness.

Corrupting by Junsu should always be encouraged. ♥
I don't think there is any shortage of encouragement. ;)

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elizacake June 29 2008, 03:43:11 UTC
This was supposed to be it for Jaechun, but I'm getting glared at (by the muses) so I may have to figure out something....

I'm looking forward to the Yoosumin action.
Then go and read #2. :D That was my Yoosumin story for this series.

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melodeon_effect June 27 2008, 13:55:12 UTC
LOLZ! just finished 16 and this...they are crazy, hot, dorks...
guh the hosumin in 16 made my day..yhfdskagf I can't wait for minsu's do over and FINALLY hosu!sex. They are so difficult XDD but hehe kudos to Junsu for not letting Yunho slip away again. They still seem a bit cautious with each other here. While Jaechun totally isn't hahahahahaha Jaejoong is so silly.

"The way I see it, I made Junsu come. And because he did, you did, so I made you come, too."

I swear your Jae kills me. Jae would think like that.

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elizacake June 29 2008, 04:00:25 UTC
HEE! Glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes it really is all about the sex. ;)

And Jae.... The less said the better.

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elizacake July 27 2008, 01:47:37 UTC
I'm not so sure about me rocking. I think I'm going to have to do another story for this pairing (not SH). Something was...missing. Okay, three somethings were missing, but that's a different story again. *sigh* I can't ask Rana what's missing, she'll say, "Puppies!" Any thoughts from your end of town?

I <3 my fish.

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elizacake July 27 2008, 05:02:49 UTC
And Changmin is like a sex catalyst.

ROTF!!! And my Min is not pleased because he does not appreciate being the reason for, yet left out of the reaction. *SNICKERING* But it was his integration into the dynamic that started to reweave the previous patterns.

After Jaeho and Yoosu, Jaejoong and Yoochun were the next most logical pairing to be shifted. I think the reason I didn't deal with them right after the threesome is that I didn't think I had to, they would adapt to the changes easily. That's also why I don't feel too bad about short changing them a bit by making their story part of the larger picture; they don't have any issues that I need to address in SH.

I'm surprised Yoochun settled.

Settled? I assume you don't mean for Junsu.

For a quickie on the floor? This is part of a larger story, this is not the only time they would have been together. But.... Hm. But I think that most of the time it has been opportunistic. I...think I've just found my issue.

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1anonymous1 July 1 2008, 22:55:52 UTC
ilu.<3

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elizacake July 27 2008, 01:49:02 UTC
Trying this again

♥ ♥ ♥

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