smoten by the frying pan of enlightenment once again
This was me at around 3:30am this morning:
Hm. This scene as written isn't really working for me. Maybe if I try it from the pov of one of the other characters. Let's try, hmm... [A]'s roommate, [B]!
*write write write*
*pause writing to wander around underground in the dark, singing do actual work things*
*return to notebook and read what's written to get back into the swing of things*
.... O.o HOLY BLISTERING CROW ON A POGO STICK!!! How did I never before realise that [B] has a massive, massive girlcrush on [A]?! o.O
Ohgod, everything up till now from [A]'s perspective supports this, but she's totally oblivious!
*laughs hysterically* Accidental rezbianism! I has the subtext, but I know not what I do! X3
*eats the rest of her chocolate bar*
Hm. This scene as written isn't really working for me. Maybe if I try it from the pov of one of the other characters. Let's try, hmm... [A]'s roommate, [B]!
*write write write*
*pause writing to wander around underground in the dark, singing do actual work things*
*return to notebook and read what's written to get back into the swing of things*
.... O.o HOLY BLISTERING CROW ON A POGO STICK!!! How did I never before realise that [B] has a massive, massive girlcrush on [A]?! o.O
Ohgod, everything up till now from [A]'s perspective supports this, but she's totally oblivious!
*laughs hysterically* Accidental rezbianism! I has the subtext, but I know not what I do! X3
*eats the rest of her chocolate bar*