um... idk what your lookin for as far as that goes but...tara7891July 7 2004, 10:28:31 UTC
i like to write... :-) :No More Calls:I take barbed wire and wrap your neck, then push you from the ledge. I watch your eyes dialate and your body tremble. I walk down to you, never letting my eyes stray from the beautiful torment pouring through your quivering lips. A pale shade of fear sweeps over your face as you wonder what i'll do next. I reach up to your neck and push the wire up a little further. With two fingers, I catch a stream of your crimson sweat and smear it across my soft lips. I run my hand from your bloody neck to the hem of your pants, unbuttoning them slowly. I kiss you gently, leaving perfect lip prints of your blood on your stomach. "Goodbye," I whisper. Your body hangs peacefully motionless. "I promise I won't call again," I reply to the abandoned stare in your eyes
if you were lookin for something else- lemme kno bc i can't say that i've ever made someone cry like a little bitch... except this one guy- but thats a little to much of an intimate detail. ;-)
Re: um... idk what your lookin for as far as that goes but...tara7891July 7 2004, 15:17:22 UTC
quite possible your fzucked in the head- but i like it too ;-) so i guess we both are if that's the case... and um- is that a yes from you then? ^^ i got sum more if you want to read them- i overuse adj's tho and i write poems if u wanna read them too- just ask! :)
Re: um... idk what your lookin for as far as that goes but...sanity_bleedsJuly 7 2004, 21:01:56 UTC
I'm not much one for poetry, but sure, I'll give you a yes for that scintillating number with the barbed wire. Still, if ever you killed me, the coroner would get a huge laugh out of examining the body......
Re: um... idk what your lookin for as far as that goes but...tara7891July 8 2004, 08:57:49 UTC
if they found you. ^^ and *ty!* but yeah i guess thatd be pretty funny- small holes in your neck... pants at your legs, and bloody lip prints at your waist: theyd probably think it was some kind of kinky foreplay that went terribly wrong. ...but nope! in my writing, i figure if they are dying to make you happy- you can at least make them happy before they die.
Re: um... idk what your lookin for as far as that goes but...sanity_bleedsJuly 8 2004, 09:37:36 UTC
Oh sure, its misguided devotion if a girl does it to the guy, but as soon as the guy tries it he's automatically a sadistic, remorseless lunatic. Ah well, you can't please em all...
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:No More Calls:I take barbed wire and wrap your neck, then push you from the ledge. I watch your eyes dialate and your body tremble. I walk down to you, never letting my eyes stray from the beautiful torment pouring through your quivering lips. A pale shade of fear sweeps over your face as you wonder what i'll do next. I reach up to your neck and push the wire up a little further. With two fingers, I catch a stream of your crimson sweat and smear it across my soft lips. I run my hand from your bloody neck to the hem of your pants, unbuttoning them slowly. I kiss you gently, leaving perfect lip prints of your blood on your stomach. "Goodbye," I whisper. Your body hangs peacefully motionless. "I promise I won't call again," I reply to the abandoned stare in your eyes
if you were lookin for something else- lemme kno bc i can't say that i've ever made someone cry like a little bitch... except this one guy- but thats a little to much of an intimate detail. ;-)
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my other poems are on a site hosted by my friend- his servers down,... beh- i'll git those to yuh later.
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