Fic: Alien Abduction. Chapter 5/5.

Feb 24, 2011 16:00

And finally we get to the end. Although (as always) I had a lot of stuff to cram in so it's a bit longer than anticipated... But - at least it's finally done! \o/ And there's waffles, oh yes. (Masterlist of 'verse here.)

Prologue | Chapter 1 | Interlude | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4Summary: This story begins with abduction and ends with ( Read more... )

my fic, alien abduction, not the last

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indy1776 March 13 2011, 19:57:41 UTC
Ooh, the layers!

Stop thinking. Work. Take what you’ve discovered, project it forward, learn from it, use it. Don’t be caught out again.

And this is a bit creepy-- not that I'm saying it's a bad thing. Just, the Seeker's definitely not human, and this shows it. He *shouldn't* be reacting like we would.

Why did people spend so much time fighting when they could learn and create instead? It was bewildering.

Love this line! The Doctor's influence, much?

Wonderful ending! :D

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elisi March 13 2011, 20:47:14 UTC
Ooh, the layers!
Eeeeeee! \o/ (I sometimes wonder if the whole thing will collapse under the weight of meta I cram in there, but so far it seems to hold up quite well.)

And this is a bit creepy-- not that I'm saying it's a bad thing. Just, the Seeker's definitely not human, and this shows it. He *shouldn't* be reacting like we would.
It's a very him reaction, and he always thinks in the long term... I often wonder whether he's a product of nature or nurture (I do these things. *puzzles at OCs who become three-dimensional*) Anyway, he has inherited his father's talent for careful planning, but uses it to anticipate crises rather than cause them. One of the things that rattle him the most [in this story] is the fact that he'd never considered this happening - he didn't have a back-up plan, he couldn't control the outcome. He's quite the little controlfreak, but a lot of it comes from knowing what the Doctor had to do, and never ever wanting to end up in a similar situation...)

Love this line! The Doctor's influence, much?Oh yes. Also ( ... )

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indy1776 March 17 2011, 22:40:58 UTC
Hey, I love the meta! (I think it's why I haven't read a lot of Eleven fic. There's so many layers in the show that if fics only works on one, they seem to be missing something.)

You have a solid grasp of your OCs, which I think is wonderful. :D I love 3-d characters.

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elisi March 18 2011, 12:56:06 UTC
Hey, I love the meta!
\o/

I think it's why I haven't read a lot of Eleven fic. There's so many layers in the show that if fics only works on one, they seem to be missing something.
*nods* I've read bits and pieces (including pretty much everything by promethia_tenk. Oh, and cinderbella333 writes fantastic stuff too. Check out Timeless Dreams if you've not read it yet, because it might be the most extraordinary, amazing, deeply layered fic I have ever read.)

You have a solid grasp of your OCs, which I think is wonderful. :D I love 3-d characters.
Thank you! They just escape and decide to do stuff on their ownn. It's strange, but quite exciting. :)

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indy1776 March 25 2011, 21:32:24 UTC
Ooh, thanks for the recs! :D

They just escape and decide to do stuff on their ownn. It's strange, but quite exciting.

I love it when characters do that! It makes them so much easier (and paradoxically harder) to write.

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elisi March 25 2011, 21:38:53 UTC
Ooh, thanks for the recs! :D
Totally my pleasure. No really!

I love it when characters do that! It makes them so much easier (and paradoxically harder) to write.
Indeed. Although I wouldn't change a thing... *pets OCs*

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