Maybe Someday. Chapter 15.

[elisi]

The lovely kathyh was able to beta this v. quickly, so I'm posting already! :) I hope you enjoy although it is short! (You like cliff hangers, right?)

Previous ChaptersFeedback feeds my muse - and right now I'm afraid that she really needs a good meal! I have most of the rest of the story planned out and I know what's going to happen next. I just don't

Comments

[annabelle528]

Woah! Now that's an evil cliffhanger!

Loved this chapter though. All of your voices were perfect. And Dawn walking in on Spike and Buffy was really cute! :)

[elisi]

Heh. I've *so* been loking forward to this bit! ;)

All of your voices were perfect.
Squee! Thank you - sometimes they behave themselves wonderfully!

[calove]

oooOOOOooooo....!

Nice cliffhanger!

It was one thing to choose Spike over Angel, being all polite and friendly, but to face her first love after having just got out of bed with her new one... and - ohmygod he can smell it, can’t he?

*snigger*

Lovely chapter :) Good luck with the figuring out of 'how'!

[elisi]

Nice cliffhanger!
Thanks! ;)

*snigger*
Poor Angel... he never catches a break!

Thank you for the feedback and the good wishes. I hope everything went OK today! ::hugs::

[_jems_]

Wow, those last few sentences felt like a sucker-punch. Didn't see it coming. And great, Dawn is still all keyed up, I love it when stories take that route since I think the show just let the potential in all of that fizzle out.

[elisi]

Wow, those last few sentences felt like a sucker-punch. Didn't see it coming.
Hurrah! It worked! :D

Dawn is still all keyed up
Well - ancient hellgod and interdimensional key... it's too good to pass up!

[kathyh]

Ah, so I was wrong about what was happening to Dawn! Seriously, I think that works better. Can't wait to read more.

[elisi]

Well, I tried for brevity, but it obviously didn't work... will do my best to write more soon!

[curiouswombat]

We-e-e-ll as long a she doesn't hurt poor Dawn....!

[elisi]

::whistles innocently::