My Immortal. Chapter 8.

Dec 02, 2008 13:02

You know what's the best thing to have when everything's really slippery? A pushchair [=stroller]! (With a child in, of course). *had lots of fun taking kids to school*

And after that little bit of silliness her comes the next chapter of My Immortal - I know, it's only been 2 weeks! Try not to faint. ;) Previous parts here, and many smooches to my ( Read more... )

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elisi December 3 2008, 07:34:29 UTC
Yes, this was much needed happiness after a long day. I loath Holiday.
I am happy to have brought cheer. :)

But anyway, story! Yay! Your Buffy voice continues to make me green with envy.
Squee. I keep meaning to re-watch some BtVS to remind me of her voice, but life continues to be busy and I forget. So I'm just winging it...

You nailed her reactions here from her anger and hurt with Giles *growls at Giles* to her wavering between being unsure of Jack and wanting to embrace the carefree fantasy.
Oh good. It's a balancing act, but I'm glad to know that I'm apparently pulling it off. I don't want her to come across as dumb or irresponsible, but on the other hand I think she's really quite adventurous.

As for Giles *grumbles again* I am kind of on Buffy's side. I want him to try and go after Jack and face the consequences. Better than going after Buffy again and making her upset. *grumbles some more*
Heh. I think you're going to LOVE where I'm going with that plotline. ;)

But the image of wee!Liam on the cover of A:AtF #14 may have helped wake up one of my other ones so it all balances out.
Sounds good - I don't think I've read a lot (if any?) of your stuff, which is *terrible* of me, but... there is not enough time. *is sad*

Damn, I'm an awfully chatty colonial tonight aren't I?
Chatty is good! :)

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