Comments | elise_509: Adrenaline

elise_509

Adrenaline

Nov 15, 2006 01:13

Title: Adrenaline
Pairing: Jack/Juliet
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: get_jackoff, bedroom
Spoilers: Vague references to S3 up through 3x05 “The Cost of Living” but nothing major.
Genre: Futurefic
Disclaimer: Not Mine!
Dedication: To laura4lad, who is my Jacket partner-in-crime. :)

( Juliet stares at his fingers as he carefully and expertly maneuvers the shiny metal instruments, so easily and quickly that it seems like second nature. )

jack/juliet

Comments 65

svmadelyn November 15 2006, 06:34:56 UTC

You have totally single-handedly sold me on the unmitigated hotness of this pairing. *g*

elise_509 November 15 2006, 06:40:30 UTC

woo-hoo! then my work here is done. *grins giddily* yay!

didibreakit November 15 2006, 06:43:31 UTC

AHHH! Jacket! Woot! I haven't read, I'm gonna bust into it right now, but I just wanted a before and after comment.
Before: Excited, giddy, cannot contain self.

I will be back in a bit :)

elise_509 November 16 2006, 04:20:21 UTC

yay! thanks for the pre-reading enthusiasm. :) you're super sweet.

prettybutt November 15 2006, 06:48:35 UTC

is dead on floor, must re-read immediately before leaving proper feedback for what seems at first glance the finest piece of literature ever written...gonna go read again to make sure ;0) GGUHHHHHHH

it IS..it is the best piece of literature ever written! prettybutt November 15 2006, 07:17:21 UTC

Take that Shakespeare! OMG! I cannot even begin to form a complete thought on this that would sound even sound remotely articulate..i just was to hold down the exclamation key forever..!!!!!. Laura..seriously..Laur that was like my wildest Jack/Juliet fantasy that I didn't even know I had until you told me about it-- in such brilliant and amazing detail I felt like a peeping tom at their window.
My favorite parts included the teasing kisses-melted me completely--talk of her being a bad girl. Hit the back of her throat-what? yes please..OH his hands--LOL writing a completely lame desmond/jack story focusing on his hands-i think i may have a fetish. There's a fun fact you never wanted to know.
ANYWAYS-such great detail, you are just a master of words and descriptions-nothing is overdone-it is believable and beautiful at the sametime. This line killed me-

Juliet falls because she knows Jack will catch her. Jack falls because he knows she wants to be caught. They better be like this after the break. PLEASE say ( ... )

oo i forgot about kate prettybutt November 15 2006, 07:22:11 UTC

how does losing taste? Kate knows, she eats that shit for breakfast.

Re: oo i forgot about kate didibreakit November 15 2006, 07:48:15 UTC

Um...I love you.

That is all :)

Thread 11

indes_elfwine November 15 2006, 07:18:33 UTC

Kate still thinks that if she ever decided to choose differently, Jack would be right back by her side. Kate seems to look at Juliet with both jealousy and pity because of her misguided outlook and confused heart.

Love, love, love. Kate doesn't get to choose anymore.

elise_509 November 16 2006, 04:37:16 UTC

Yes, isn't it just so...satisfying to have Jack be the one with the choice, and for him not to choose her? :) I'm thrilled you liked this! *hugs*

babyfirefly November 15 2006, 07:32:44 UTC

*passes out*

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wow, that was amazing.

I really want to say more, but I'd rather site here with my mouth agape in sheer Jacket glee.

Yep. Jacket > Jate x infinity.

elise_509 November 16 2006, 04:37:53 UTC

Yay! I'm happy you liked this! :) Jacket > Jate, definitely. :)