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elise_509

An Artist's Touch - Part Two

Aug 06, 2006 00:54

Series: An Artist's Touch
Part: 2/5
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Spoilers: None - AU
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Previous Parts: 1

( Jack’s heart is in his throat when he climbs the last step and pauses at the top of the staircase... )

jack/sawyer

Comments 87

halfdutch August 6 2006, 05:30:25 UTC

*loves*

OMG, that was so intensely erotic and sweet and everything -- the studio, jack standing at the window -- all of it so beautifully and vividly detailed.

Wow. Just wow.

And there's more to come!

elise_509 August 6 2006, 15:53:53 UTC

thank you! :) *hugs* Very huge thanks for appreciating the detail because that entire section of Jack standing by the window, I lost and had to re-write. It took every ounce of patience in my body to re-do all the details they way I had them and I was sure the re-write wasn't any good, so hearing that you liked that part makes me feel sooooo much better. :)

Thanks again!

el_gilliath January 7 2007, 20:01:13 UTC

OMG! What a fantastic icon! It's a manip, right?

And to the author, fantastic story. Loving thus far!

barley_sugar August 6 2006, 10:03:33 UTC

Wow, I read the first part a while ago, but never got around to commenting... that was... wow. Great! I love how it's totally AU, but you still capture the essence of both of the character's personalities from the show ;) Awesome job!

elise_509 August 6 2006, 15:55:31 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate that. :) And I'm thrilled that you liked it. *hugs* you're too kind!

you don't even wanna know.... keyweegirlie August 6 2006, 10:47:52 UTC

OMG, you don't even wanna know how giddy and excited I was to realize that you updated this. :-)

I don't even know where to start or what exactly my favorite part was...maybe when James pushed Jack up against the window...or actually I think it might have been the combo of when Jack finally reached down to touch Sawyer, and then when he dipped his head down to taste him. Something about those two actions spoke volumes...

Can't wait for the next part, I'll be trying to wait patiently.
~C~
(wow, I didn't quote anything, that's kinda odd for me)

Re: you don't even wanna know.... elise_509 August 6 2006, 15:57:08 UTC

Thank you so much! :) You make me get all giddy with your nice comments! I'm really happy you liked it - this part gave me so much trouble, I was ready to throw the whole AU out the window and call it quits. So needless to say, I'm ecstatic that you thought it was good. *hugs you hard*

Re: you don't even wanna know.... keyweegirlie August 6 2006, 19:36:53 UTC

I was ready to throw the whole AU out the window and call it quits.

Oh don't you dare! Take all the time in the world that you need to write the next part, but just write the next part. I'll beat you up if you don't...LOL. I really like this James...he reminds me of someone, so I need to live vicariously through your fic. (good reason, huh?) :-P

*hugs you back hard*
~C~

assassinofjoy August 6 2006, 11:10:10 UTC

WOW. This is wonderful. Very hot and sex and tender and GUH. I love how timid Jack is in the brginning and little by little, just giving in ... *diez and iz ded* Man, art is sexy *grins*

Wonderful installment, sugar! I can't wait to read more! *loves*

elise_509 August 6 2006, 15:58:59 UTC

*giggles* art IS sexy! ;) so happy that you liked. jack's progression was so hard because i seriously just wanted them to get it ON and had to keep reminding myself to have them take it little by little. Whole part ended up being nothing but pr0n that way, but hey...we can do the whole "plot" thing later, can't we? ;)

ermer00 August 6 2006, 11:15:23 UTC

*Squueee* I got so excited to see this part added. I'm glad you managed to re-write it after your computer was a bitch.

This was just so....gbojnsinsfibfawf. The way you wrote their feelings and their movements just before they had the extremely hot sex was just so beautifully vivid and portrayed Jack's trepidation so well. And of course the OMGHOTSEX was just wonderful in so many ways. *sighs happily*

elise_509 August 6 2006, 16:01:16 UTC

thank you babe! :) Computer ARE a b*tch but I couldn't let them win! Had to re-write just to spite them. rawwrrr.

thanks for such nice and thoughtful compliments! you make me blush. :) i'm really happy that you liked it though and thought Jack's trepidation came across. i was telling someone in an earlier comment that i had to keep reminding myself to keep it slow because i so desperately wanted the boys to just do it already! haha. i'm a silly girl. ;)