Stripped

May 26, 2006 22:44

Title: Stripped
Pairing: Jack/Kate
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: up though 2x17 “Lockdown” but then goes AU- kinda picks up sometime after Jack & Sawyer’s game, as if the last few scenes never happened.
Disclaimers: In my world, Kate and Jack can do it and Kate wouldn’t have to die afterward as some kind of perverse warning against premarital sex for ( Read more... )

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touchofxpink May 27 2006, 03:41:55 UTC
I love your fics. They are so good. All of them. They're tasteful yet SO HAWT and also just amazing. I wish each and everyone were canon. Now that it's on a break, I can pretend :)

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elise_509 May 27 2006, 03:57:18 UTC
thank you so much! i was really stuck on the last half of the fic, got total writer's block, but finally broke through today. i'm glad it turned out okay! thank you for your wonderful compliments! :) i wish j/k was canon too...we can pretend together. (psssst...you writing more of that j/k in the cell together fic, "Trapped"?)

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touchofxpink May 27 2006, 04:13:14 UTC
Oh yes. I'm having a horrible writer's block, too, though. I know exactly where I want to go with the fic, but the second chapter is kind of transition-y and I can't seem to get it quite right. Hopefully I can break through this weekend, when I actually have time to breathe!

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elise_509 May 27 2006, 05:07:09 UTC
oh, are you really busy? :( i'm sorry. i hate not having time to write.

i hate the transition-y chapters, because you're so excited to get to the good parts, and you know what you want to write, you just...can't yet. oh, the pain!

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_milz_ May 27 2006, 04:28:47 UTC
WOW.
This was by far, one of the best fics...ever. And i'm not joking. I've never had so much reading a fic before. The end, with all the inside jokes b/w them was awesome. And it was so believable. Your characterization is amazing. It's like you get into their heads. It's CRAZY!!

Wow, I'm seriously considering printing this puppy out and bringing it to bed, hoping that if I hug it tight enough I'll get a dream.

Wow, I need some alone time. Tee hee
You've done it AGAIN!
*bows*

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elise_509 May 27 2006, 05:09:03 UTC
really? it's so weird, because i had such a hard time getting the second half done, i was SURE it sucked. i was ready for everyone to hate it and criticize it. so...yay! i'm really, really thrilled that you liked it! :)

Wow, I'm seriously considering printing this puppy out and bringing it to bed, hoping that if I hug it tight enough I'll get a dream.

that's the funniest thing, ever. hope you have good dreams! :)

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__inadream May 27 2006, 04:35:59 UTC
I love you so much. You make me happy. It was a wonderful birthday present, more than a girl could ask for. =)

This was exactly how I was picturing it. Jack's hesitation and Kate's flirtaciousness, and Jack finally giving in... and the scene at the end with Sawyer and Charlie was brilliant. This may be my favorite fic of yours! ♥

“Nothing I wasn’t willing to part with,” Jack states, echoing a taunt Sawyer had given him a few weeks ago when Kate had prompted him to return his gun. Sawyer shoots him a glare and then refocuses his gaze on Kate.
Heeeeee :D

Like the many times she’s talked Jack back from the brink of exhaustion, calmed him down when the stress piling upon him was getting to be too much, she knows now that she has to guide him through this, to let Jack take a break from being in charge all the time. Just beautiful. I love it ( ... )

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elise_509 May 27 2006, 05:11:57 UTC
i am so so so so so happy that you liked it. i was really worried you wouldn't, that it wasn't going to be what you imagined at all. *phew* *grins* i'm totally thrilled now, you've made my night.

It's like you take what I want to say and write it out in more eloquent words and phrases than I could have thought of.

darling, you are very eloquent, there's no need for me to paraphrase you! ;) thanks for picking the parts you liked - i appreciate that very much!

i hope your birthday was awesome and i hope you're feeling better, sweetie! sorry that you were sick. i know that sucks big time.

*big huge glomping hugs back* love you mucho!

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__inadream May 28 2006, 06:48:16 UTC
why wouldn't i like it?! the only one of yours EVER that i haven't liked is the claire/jack one.

and srsly, i am not as eloquent as you. i don't even compare. but thank you, lol.

how are you feeling? ♥

hey, did you happen to read my addison/derek fic? i don't know if you're mer/der or ad/dek or neither, but it would be awesome if you could read it. because honestly? i have this sad, compulsive need to have you review and like what i write. pathetic, i know. but that's me.

love you :)

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elise_509 May 28 2006, 08:08:04 UTC
addison/derek? no, i think i must've missed it! :( i love addison, i'll definitely read it! :) i have a compulsive need for your fb too, so don't worry, it's mutual!

i'm feeling better, finally got an antibiotic that worked! what about you? are you feeling okay?

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asdkfjasdjklasdkjkl amantium_irae May 27 2006, 07:10:43 UTC
OMG, you have no idea how long I've been waiting for you to write this... Basically since Lockdown aired. Heck, I was thinking of this while Lockdown aired.

There's a reason I only read fics from three or four authors and it's that not that many writers manage to keep them in character. You are the Queen of in character and I love you for that! This is who they are and this is exactly what would happen. The poker stuff... I have no freaking clue what any of that meant, but I respect you so much for working all those details in. I did research and wrote neurosurgery!smut, so I know what it's like. :D

"if I want your pants, I’ll get your pants"

You killed me right there. And I do believe the smut was THE hottest I've ever read... omg. So true about wanting him since he smiled at her that first night by the fire *points at icon* because any sane woman would! GAH.

Um. I feel kinda stupid for saying this, but I do have one tiny, teensy comment to make...

“Hey, if I want your pants, I’ll get your pants,” Kate retorts, basically ( ... )

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Re: asdkfjasdjklasdkjkl elise_509 May 27 2006, 16:22:28 UTC
thanks for the compliments! i'm really glad that you liked it! :) luckily, for this fic, I didn't have to research, I just threw around poker stuff I happen to know. I'm doing mega-research for my J/S poker fic though, cause I figure between the two them they'd have to know tons more than me!!! lol.

oo, neurosurgery!Smut? point me in that direction, please. :)

So true about wanting him since he smiled at her that first night by the fire *points at icon* because any sane woman would! GAH.
hells, that's where he definitely got me!

I felt I'd better remind where the lines came from in case there were people who didn't see the episodes / had forgotten. i didn't want to assume everyone knew canon like i did! too much handholding you think? and nitpicking is fine! it helps. :)

i'm happy i could help fill the Jate smut void. i wish there was more of it out there!

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danamulder May 27 2006, 08:01:49 UTC
This was really beautiful! I really want Kate to finally break down those big, strong walls Jack has so firmly set around him. You did that really well.

Also, it was hot. hee

I love J/K, but anything that pisses Sawyer off just makes me love it more. ;) Nice work.

I love your icon, too. That's hilarious. ;)

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elise_509 May 27 2006, 16:25:39 UTC
yeah, sometimes i think it would take a bulldozer to break down jack's defenses. kate basically throwing herself at him qualifies as a bulldozer, i think! :)

i'm a big sawyer fan but it's impossible to write jate smut without pissing sawyer off, so i do what needs to be done! ;)

icon is from: ... )

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