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elise_509

A Pain That I'm Used To - Part Six

Apr 09, 2006 21:57

Series: A Pain That I’m Used To
Title: Part Six: Loved
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not Mine!
Note: Futurefic - set 1 year post-rescue
Previous Parts: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5

A/N: So...230 pages later, "A Pain That I'm Used To" is finally done. I wanted to thank everybody who has been reading this for the past three and a half ( Read more... )

jack/sawyer

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asioleh April 10 2006, 02:25:13 UTC

I will read it tomorrow since I was just going to shut down my computer for the night, but I had to say how happy I am to see the final part of this story today, I was waiting for it all month. Congratulations for a great story. I sure that I will enjoy read this part as much I did the others.

elise_509 April 10 2006, 03:27:14 UTC

thank you! i hope you like it when you finally get to read it. :)

emiliglia April 10 2006, 03:56:48 UTC

I just know this is gonna be keeping me up passed my bedtime. Was it really 230 pages? Holy shit that's long, but I really love this story.

And this part was all sorts of hot. Especially the part in the car...and on the car... You almost killed me.

“And we can’t help it, man, we’re just sexy sons of bitches.”

That made me giggle. Don't be surprised if it ends up on an icon.

Next part!

elise_509 April 10 2006, 13:44:24 UTC

Was it really 230 pages? Holy shit that's long.

I know...I added up all the parts last night into one file and was like...holy CRAP. And the font size was smaller than normal too, so I don't know how long it would be at size 12. I decided I definitely had way too much time on my hands when I started writing this fic. ;) I don't know WHAT I was thinking.

Yeah, the smut kinda went outta control in this part. But I promised a smutty ending, so at least I delivered! lol.

That made me giggle. Don't be surprised if it ends up on an icon.

glad it made you giggle. and if you make it into an icon, I will laugh so hard and be amused forever. please do that! i'd like to see it. :)

bigbizkit July 14 2006, 18:11:29 UTC

Whew! It's past 2am and I'm still up reading this like a novel.

How do you manage to write this story? I mean, if I'm the one behind it, it would take an eternity for me to jot down these lines. Not to mention brainstorming for ideas. Great work! Jack's like a Greek god!

kataclysmic April 10 2006, 06:52:18 UTC

...

I have to go to work. I wanna stay home and read! Can I call in sick?

*flails*

elise_509 April 10 2006, 14:29:24 UTC

awww, work sucks. i hope you like it when you get to read it later, and that work was good for you! :)

shivedheart April 10 2006, 13:59:52 UTC

*mutters incoherently*

You! YOU have made my brain 'splode! It's Monday and I'm supposed to be hard at work, but nooooooooo! Oh. My. God. This was well worth the wait!

“Just shut up and go, would you? These girls see you and I don’t even get a chance. You totally Zack Morris my Screech.”

That right there? Awesome. Pure awesome! You are my hero. Now, off to read part two!

I can't believe it's over after this. *sobs*

elise_509 April 10 2006, 14:31:49 UTC

yeah, i figured holycitygirl is in chicago so I had better fill the Monday Fic Void! lol. glad it made your monday better and kept you from doing work!

glad you liked the Zack Morris line. Nothing like a Saved by the Bell shoutout. :) lol.

don't cry! be happy! jack/sawyer smut is supposed to make you happy!

inthekeyofd April 10 2006, 14:44:08 UTC

I love this story!! First, that Sawyer is just so into Jack, that no one can compare because they just aren't Jack. And I love the way that Sawyer answers the phone. *smile*

The hotness is wonderful, it just adds to the flavor of this story.

p.s. extra points for using a midori sour as a drink!!!

elise_509 April 10 2006, 15:18:08 UTC

you like midori sours? they're my personal fave, hence the use of it. ;)

that no one can compare because they just aren't Jack.
isn't that how we all feel? lol.

inthekeyofd April 10 2006, 15:21:43 UTC

Yep, I like midori sours, they are a great drink when you want something but not too too much..I was going to put them in one of my stories, as a change from their usual drinks, so I give you big props for that!!!!

And Jack, yeah, that's the way I feel too, the others are even in the same league--Sawyer's loyal..love that!!

elise_509 April 10 2006, 15:29:02 UTC

midori sours ARE great when you want something but not too much. they're girly but not too girly, AND they're a fun color. :)

i loved making sawyer so "jack's mine!" in this fic, especially with the girls in the bar. i can just see him loving to rub it in people's faces, getting such joy from it.

btw, your icon is F*cking Hot.

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