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elise_509

All Tied Up

Feb 14, 2008 02:06

Title: All Tied Up
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None - AU
Disclaimer: Not Mine!
A/N: It’s the A Pain That I'm Used To boys again. I can't help myself!
Dedication: To zelda_zee, because she is the best.

( The fact that Jack takes yet another look back might offend Sawyer if Jack didn’t look so damned adorable in his bewilderment. )

jack/sawyer

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zelda_zee February 14 2008, 08:01:07 UTC

Oh how wonderful! I can't believe you wrote this so soon! And awww, thanks so much for the dedication, hon. You know I love these guys liek whoa - I have this crazy affection for them that makes me so happy - and of course I know I'm not the only one.

I just love this, it's so lusciously hot! The whole dirty talk thing - perfect! I love Sawyer talking dirty, but his reaction to Jack doing it is even better. GUH.

Your ending is perfect. I simply adore Sawyer's answer to Jack's question. It's so true that Jack would only ever let Sawyer see that part of him, and I love it that Sawyer knows that and he realizes how that's something to treasure. And that to him, the fact that Jack trusts him is most important of all.

Now see, you go and write all that gorgeous smut and here I am waxing on and on about your emo dialog at the end! But these guys always hit me with an emo punch, and that's why I love 'em so.

elise_509 February 14 2008, 08:54:08 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! I really wanted to get it done so there could be some Jack/Sawyer smut for V-Day. :) It makes me happy to make you happy, so it was great incentive to try and get the mojo back. *hugs*

I think I'm more in Jack's camp and not so comfortable writing the dirty talk, so I'm happy to hear that it was a-ok! I never feel like it's dirty enough, but then I think it's too dirty, that Jack would never say that...lol. Jack's tough to get talkin' nasty.

The boys do love their emo dialogue, I like to throw them into some mushy lovey stuff when I can. I'm happy you like it too, and that Sawyer's answer to Jack's question seems in line with their characters, at least per this AU anyway. ;)

Now I feel like I need to write a J/S story from Jack's POV though, I think Sawyer lovers got the short shrift with this one because it was all from Sawyer's POV, looking at Jack. lol.

*loves you*

zelda_zee February 14 2008, 19:33:35 UTC

It's great to have J/S smut for V-day, especially this, which is very romantic as well.

Now I feel like I need to write a J/S story from Jack's POV

This Sawyer-lover is thrilled at that idea! :)

explodes February 14 2008, 09:03:52 UTC

The vivid stars and lines never stop being a fascination for him, their meaning still a mystery to him even after all this time. He gets the feeling that if he asked Jack when and why he got them, Jack would tell him, but Sawyer thinks maybe he prefers not knowing. He kind of likes it better that way.

I don't know why, but I think that was my favourite part of the entire fic, my gosh. Well, there were a lot of favourite parts, but that stuck out the most, I think. It just- Hmm. It was striking, I think.

I really liked this. The porn was hot, of course. But the interaction between Sawyer and Jack seemed so real and believable, like I could hear every bit of their banter. I think you did an incredible job with this. ♥

elise_509 February 15 2008, 20:54:51 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm kind of in love with Jack's tattoos myself, so I love to write about them whenever I can. :) I'm glad that you liked that part, and the fic in general. It's so nice of you to read and to comment! *hugs*

explodes February 15 2008, 21:20:40 UTC

First off; icon love♥

And I love his tattoos, too, and seeing them included in fic makes my fangirl totally happy. :)

I'm a lurker, so I don't really comment to anything a lot (too shy!), but I really felt the need to tell you how great this was.

janie_tangerine February 14 2008, 10:02:28 UTC

Wow. Happy Valentine's indeed! *takes a fan out from somewhere because is dead from the hotness*

Seriously. If this was the porn you were talking about the other day, sure we don't get bored! I think my coherence has been shut down or something but this was so good I don't even know where to start from.

Apart from the pricelessness of Jack tied up to the bed (*dies*), this had so many great details in it. Jack finding it so strange that Sawyer could go, buy food and even his favorite food, the spoon licking (okay, my memory of Kate, Jack and spoons on the show is clearly erased from now), Sawyer getting excited on the dirty talk (and I loved the detail about the creaking of the bed which doesn't feel like something he'd try to do while conning) and the ending. God the ending was just perfection. Okay, I probably forgot a lot of other things I liked (and uhm, yes, the sex was totally delicious BTW if it didn't come through.. ;) ) and so I can go and try to regain my normal body temperature. I think. ♥

elise_509 February 15 2008, 20:56:48 UTC

*fans you*

Hee, thanks babe. This was the porn I was having such trouble with. I finally just sat down and made myself write it. I didn't beta it at all before I posted the story, so I'm sure that it's riddled with horrible typos and such, lol.

Thank you for taking the time to tell me your favorite parts/details and all! That is really sweet of you, I can't tell you how much I appreciate that. *loves you*

bluedahlia February 14 2008, 12:59:08 UTC

What a lovely way to start Valentines Day. *Ü*

Jack talking dirty is about as good as it gets for me kink wise. Sawyer talking dirty being a very close second.

How luved up are these two? They just can't help themselves. Which is good news for us 'cause the resulting sex is fabulous.

Thank you so much for sharing ♥

elise_509 February 15 2008, 20:58:02 UTC

Glad to have started your V-day off on the right foot! :) I love the boys talking dirty but I'm always scared of writing it, so I'm happy that you liked how dirty and luved up they were.

Thank you so much for reading and for commenting! *hugs*

alemyrddin February 14 2008, 15:06:38 UTC

oh wow, this is the best Vday gift!
I'm happy that our plea for tied!Jack has been satisfied so soon!

And it was lovely, and hot. I think one of things I like most is that we get to see Jack through Sawyer's eyes, and he finds Jack unerringly sexy and everything is filled with love.

It’s strange but exhilarating to feel the rush of a natural high based only off of Jack’s smile.
awww.

But, even if the focus in this fic is on Jack, I loved Sawyer as well. In particular, how adorable it was that Sawyer took the time to put the ice cream back in the refrigerator and the spoons in the sink - living with Jack has really changed him.
:)

elise_509 February 15 2008, 21:00:37 UTC

:) I wanted to write that tied!up Jack fic for V-day, so I sat myself down and told myself I had no choice, I had to get my ass in gear and get it done! I'm so glad you liked the result, especially that you liked seeing Jack through Sawyer's eyes. Usually I try to switch POVs to give them both some time, but this one just started out with Sawyer and I kept it that way. It felt like that's how it needed to be. Thanks for telling me the details you liked! That makes my day. *hugs and love*