Payback

[elise_509]

Title: Payback
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None - AU
Disclaimer: Not mine!
A/N: So this is a scene from A Pain That I'm Used To that I mentioned in passing, then I decided yesterday I wanted to write on a whim. You don't really need to know that series to read this, even though it's rooted in that story. It's totally pure porn

Comments

[zelda_zee]

Do you know that I just knew without a doubt what scene this was going to be? Cuz I was one of the ones clamoring for you to write it all that time ago!

Awesome! Awesomely hot, girl! Whew! It was everything I'd hoped for. Raw and rough and passionate and still loving. So good to get to go back and revisit the guys of APTIUT! So happy they're still madly in love and still fucking each other's brains out. :D

Although now I think I want you to write Sawyer tying Jack up in bed! See, by now you should know better than to tease like that or readers will demand that you write it. ♥

[elise_509]

Woo! I'm glad that you enjoyed this. I was just sitting around today and was like, "You know what? Jack and Sawyer need some sex." And I figured I'd pull this one back out. It's always kind of been sitting in the back of my mind for a rainy day. :) It's fun to bring the APTIUT boys back out to play, and I'm happy you think so too. They will always be madly in love and fucking each other's brains out!

Hmmm, Jack tied to a bed. You know I'll write it. I love tying Jack to things and having Sawyer sex him up. ;)

Thanks for reading and for your feedback! *glomps*

[zelda_zee]

Hmmm, Jack tied to a bed. You know I'll write it.

You will? With these guys? The APTUIT ones? YAY! *Snoopy dances*

[elise_509]

Hee! :) I'm going to try to write it this weekend while I'm in a porny mood. It strikes every so often and I just want to throw Jack at anything that moves. lol.

[isis2015]

Oh good God, woman. I always hoped you'd fill in the story behind that mention, because, good Lord, it was hot as a passing mention, but this? Holy hell. I think you're going to make a lot of people happy with this (myself included) because I remember it was one of the more popular parts of that story. And, Lord knows, I always love hearing from these boys, now that they're beyond all the drama and they can just be happy and in love. ♥

[elise_509]

I'm so glad I made you happy! That little scene has been kind of stewing in my brain ever since then, because people responded so strongly to it, but I kind of figured I'd never get around to writing it and that people had forgotten about it anyway...so I'm thrilled that it was still fresh in your memory! It was fun to write, I haven't all out porned these boys in awhile, and like you said, I love coming back to the APTIUT boys because after all the angst I put them through, it's fun to just sex the hell out of them now. ;)

*loves you*

[cynthia_arrow]

Umm...

Umm...

*iz ded*

Seriously? Hottest thing I've read in forever. I'd give you more than that if it wasn't 1:30 in the morning...and if I had any brain cells left. Jesus Christ.

[elise_509]

:)

You make me happy. :)

I'm glad that this was hot, b/c my porn writing skills have grown rusty in disuse over the past 1/2 year. It was such fun to sex our boys up again!

*MUAH*

[obreesprit]

I *love* scenes like this!!! APTIUT had a bunch of those scenes where everything was just so urgent and hot that it engulfed everything-- I absolutely adore that. I'm glad you were able to go back to that series-- absolutely love it. Jack and Sawyer do need to constantly sex each other up and I'm glad you're here to help out with that!

Yay, porn! (sings-- the internet is for porn!)

Thank you for feeding our libidos and our imaginations!

[elise_509]

Thank you so much! I love coming back to this series because the boys were so in love, but I've gotten past all the angst so now I can just sex them as I please. lol. They really do need to sex each other up constantly. :)

[astra2104]

NO WORDS.

Just... GUH

Kill me, won't you. And Zelda's right, you so have to write that tied up scene.

*continues to be dead*

[elise_509]

*tries to revive you* You can't continue to be dead, or else you won't get to read the tied-up scene. ;)

Thank you so so much, babe! I'm really relieved that you found this guh-worthy. It's been awhile since I've really gotten down and dirty with these boys! :)

*glomps*