Patience

[elise_509]

Title: Patience
Pairing: Jack/Juliet
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Post-Island AU, Vague S3 mentions.
Disclaimer: Not Mine!
Prompts: For get_jackoff #8, Hospital Scrubs, and prettybutt’s prompt Medical Incredible
A/N: Laura, this is unabashed porny schmoop. Hope you like it!

Comments

[slybrunette]

I love this! Your Juliet voice is great -- I can hear every line in my head clearly, and she's hard to nail down (at least for me). And the smutty parts...well, who wouldn't love those?

Great fic!

(Also you just reminded me that I still have to do mine -- crap!)

[elise_509]

Oh my goodness, you're a fast reader! :) Thanks for reading and for your comments, sweetie. I feel like my het porn ability is totally broken, I haven't written any in so long. This feels rusty and boring to me :( but I realized yesterday that OH CRAP! I never wrote this for Laura, so I sat right down and made myself do it. So I'm relieved that the smutty parts are okay, lol.

Can't wait to read yours! :)

[slybrunette]

I refresh my flist every five minutes so I just caught it early, that's all. And it doesn't feel boring to me, I think it's great!

[gregoria44]

Hee! Someone noticed that Jack knows nothing about childbirth!!

(Only took three series!)

Hotter than a hottentot.

Hooray for these two having some fun

[elise_509]

Hee, yeah. Having Juliet around is good so everyone can stop asking the spinal surgeon for advice on something he probably only spent a millisecond on in med school.

Hooray for fun indeed, they deserve it! :) I'm glad you liked this, sweetie. *hugs*

[iorwen107]

this is so lovely. Usually Jacket smut is rough and fast. This was fast but oh so tender and full of love. It was so nice to read especially since I feel kind of bruised emotionally today. You're such a wonderful talent. XOXO

[elise_509]

Aw, I'm sorry you're feeling bruised today. :( *hugs* But I'm glad this could help you out! I'm so happy you liked it; thanks for reading and for your sweet words!

[elliotsmelliot]

Wow! I'm not Juliet's biggest fan and usually skip this pairing but I was curious to see what you would do with it. You have such a spot-on Juliet voice. Even with her concise phrases I could hear her voice. I liked the detail of her noticing Jack's hands being softer now. I'm so glad my prejudices didn't keep me away. Our fandom suffers from an abyss of het smut but this filled the gap nicely. Also, it made me so happy for Sun.

[elise_509]

Thank you for taking a chance on reading a pairing you usually skip! That's so awesome of you, so many people don't take that risk. It's very cool. And thank you for your kind compliments on the story and on Juliet's voice! I really like Juliet, I love trying to write her. :)

Our fandom does suffer from a lack of het smut indeed. I'm trying to get back to finishing my Jack/Kate and Ana/Jack/Kate series that I left dangling so long ago, so hopefully I can get some het smut out there. :)

thank you again! *hugs*

[fierce_desea]

Oh, this was great. If only the future could be like this for them. I love the way you wrote Juliet. This fic is just beautiful and lovely. And hot. It is hot too. ;)

And salmon scrubs!! *giggles* That was awesome.

[elise_509]

Thank you so much! *hugs* I wish the future could be happy and smutty for them too.

I was totally thinking of Addison when I wrote that. Juliet had to have scrubs just like her. :)