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elise_509

An Artist's Touch - Part Four

Jan 07, 2007 00:42

Series: An Artist’s Touch
Part: 4/5
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Spoilers: None - AU
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Previous Parts: 1 | 2 | 3

( He's tried this, night after night after night, but nothing works. )

jack/sawyer

Comments 15

indes_elfwine January 7 2007, 06:02:13 UTC

Jack is inspiring and James wants to draw him. Desperately. He feels a longing for it whenever they wake in the morning and sunlight is streaming across Jack’s face in the most perfect way, a soft warm glow caressing his body as he lies sleeping, twisted in James’ sheets and in his arms.

Oh, beautiful. Beautiful mental images. I love how much James is starting to need Jack, but I really hope James in't going to be an ass over this and hurt Jack, even though I think he will because he's James and he's a moody artist and if you can't fall in love with Jack you can't fall in love with anyone. Ever.

elise_509 January 8 2007, 01:52:00 UTC

Thank you so much! James is falling hard for Jack and alternately gives into and runs away from it and I think he's exceptionally confused. He's going to hurt Jack a lot but in doing so he's going to realize how screwed up he's been and struggle to make it right. He has a long journey ahead.

You're right - if you can't fall in love with Jack, who CAN you fall in lov with? nobody!

Thanks for reading and for the fb! *loves you*

prettybutt January 7 2007, 08:05:54 UTC

I'd like to take a moment to make a sad face that IN DESPAIR isn't here, and turn my frown upside down because now i have 4 parts to read of this fic before i get another icky TBC to bug you about daily..look forward to that my friend. I have a date with your lj tomorrow. Bring me my dark carpenter Jack *muah

elise_509 January 8 2007, 01:53:00 UTC

I'm working on dark carpenter Jack right now. ;)

My TBCs are evil, I know, I've been told. But I'm working on it, I really am! I'm trying to get things wrapped up.

Hope you like it when you get to read it! *hugs*

magickaldreamer January 7 2007, 08:37:57 UTC

No. You did not post this right before I decide to go to bed. *Pouts.*

Well, it's getting its own tab until I wake up and finish reading it!

elise_509 January 8 2007, 01:53:36 UTC

Sorry, bad timing! :| Hope you like it when you get to read it!!! :)

cmonkatiekatie January 7 2007, 11:12:22 UTC

mmm, finishing the rest of this tomorrow, my brain can't do it justice just now.

This part though, WOW!! I love how you started it and ended it in the same place, and everything in between was beautifully written and hot and oh so angsty. Till manana!

elise_509 January 8 2007, 01:54:49 UTC

I'm glad you liked this! I almost ended it right here, but then I decided I really needed the next scene to set up what happens in the next part, that it couldn't wait, so I kept going.

Thanks for reading and for the lovely fb! Hope you like the rest!

cmonkatiekatie January 8 2007, 02:13:02 UTC

Hee, I was totally reading the ext part when you wrote this comment. For some reason that tickles me.

yeah, you updated... speedcat93 January 7 2007, 12:47:06 UTC

sh*t! I've got to go, already late but saving it to memories and will comment tonight. Bye ;-)