The First Time, Chapter 2

[elisa_trapt]

Title: The First Time
Rating: I've decided I'm going with mild R. Does that count?
A/N: Hi everyone! Sorry, I haven't been ignoring you - just got back from a long weekend trip to Las Vegas this afternoon, and I had no Internet when I was there - very tragic! Also tragic, I did not win big and get to quit my job. Shoot. Anyway, my sincere thanks to

Comments

[bsofthewest]

This is just wonderfully written. I actually can't imagine that Pepa will get better, but I will read every entry with eagerness.
This was perfect:
"Silvia counted on me! She counted on me, and look what happened! No one should count on me, no one!”

[bsofthewest]

Also, do you think you could put a link to the chapters so we have them all together?

[elisa_trapt]

I'm going to try! This LJ posting world is new to me, so I'm learning as I go. And bugging the hell out of supercontenta in the process!

[bsofthewest]

Well, I hope you master LJ's little system because, you my friend, will develop a following with writing like this.

[elisa_trapt]

Holy mother, it took me over an hour, but I think I finally figured this beast out! This chapter should now have a link to chapter 1, and I think I've got it now! Phew!

[elisa_trapt]

Oy, can you imagine? I mean, the absolute horrible guilt Pepa must be feeling? That she convinced Silvia everything would be okay, that Silvia pretty much told her that she felt utterly safe with her, and then...THAT?? How she actually didn't curl up in a ball and die is beyond me.

Thank you for the kind words. It's definitely going to take her a while, but she'll get there.