The First Time, Chapter 13

[elisa_trapt]

Title: The First Time
Rating: R
A/N: Here we are at lucky 13! I have to give a big shout out to supercontenta on this chapter. I will admit I was hesitant to write it, but she pointed out that the story needed it. She was right. Maybe she deserves that crown she protects so zealously after all. Maybe. And for everyone who wanted a longer chapter, well, here you

Comments

[lovelyafterglow]

Can't do it...just can't do it. This is so well-written, but gah, it's like a dagger to the heart.

I'm an awful person and all I keep thinking is "why can't not-Silvia and Silvia switch places?? Not-Silvia can be nice and buried and Silvia can come back, and then I'll be happy!" Annnnnd, for some reason, I don't think that's where you're going with the story. :-P

(Okay, okay, I need to stop calling her "Not-Silvia", but I think of her as Raquel, because that's what they named her at CoM. Raquel + Pepa = Rape, which sounds wrong in English but actually means "monkfish" in Spanish, and that's one nasty-looking sucker, so I approve.)

[junebuggy01]

Rape? *snickers* *goes off to google what a monkfish looks like*

[elisa_trapt]

Did you see that thing?! It's not winning any beauty pageants anytime soon!

[junebuggy01]

*Shivers* yeah, I saw them... Sexy kinda xD

[junebuggy01]

Oh gosh, Elisa... *sighs* Fantabulously written. Good. But I'm of the same mind as Lovely. I really can't do it. *Cries in a corner*

But I have to agree with what Supes said somewhere while pimping ghost_silvia, without some super natural way of handling Pepa in a relationship and not bringing Silvia back, this is handled really well. *thinks* I'm sure that wasn't her words verbatum, but, whatever.

Oh, also... you totally lied to me. You said that you were going to make Pepa a BAN! xD

[elisa_trapt]

Thanks, juney!

But to be clear, I don't believe I ever said I was making Pepa in a BAN! What I SAID was that I might have a BAN!Outfit in my closet. You know, the one that you're now romping around in. Sheesh, juney, if YOU'RE wearing it, how am I suppose to give it to Pepa? Hmmm?

Also, as I suggested, and supes confirmed (whilst ruthlessly teasing us about a ghost we all know and love and yet remains stubbornly hidden), it just would not be fair to send Pepa into a nunnery. Can you imagine? Pepa Miranda on the loose. Confused nuns. Pure chaos. I just can't, in good conscience, be a part of that, juney. Think of all those good holy ladies, please!

[junebuggy01]

I will gladly strip out of my BAN!Outfit and give it to you to give to Pepa! Just say the word. And okay, you may not have said that you'd make Pepa a BAN!, but you did say that she and Marta were going to become sisters in habits and take vows of chastity.

And oh gosh! I can see it now! The Nun_smut that would occur!*thinks* wait... that's a bad thing, how now?

[elisa_trapt]

So let me see if I understand this. If you give me the BAN!Outfit to give to Pepa, you'll then be running around with...nothing on?? Juney, it's not that kind of journal. Not yet, anyway. Possibly in the future.

Also, I am NOT writing you Nun!Smut, for Heaven's sake! I was taught by nuns! For 12 years! Oh, ewwww, gah! That is NOT an image I want! *runs off to possibly gouge eyes out*

[poetic_daze]

dang it i held out as long as i could. but i finaly broke down and read this thing all the way through... madam i do believe i hate you deeply.

*calming breath*
no no. that is not fair. i do not hate you. But look at what you are doing to my Pepa!! *pout* She's kissing and having mushy feelings!! feelings NOT about Silvia! what world is this?! Is this a world we are expected to live in?!! D:

lol but really. you are doing a fantastic job with this fic. Its a really interesting take.

[elisa_trapt]

PD! Can I call you PD? Or is it too soon? Are we not at a place where we can shorten each other's names yet? Hmmm, maybe not, since I think you might be hatin' on me right now. But I'm going to try to change that.

Please, please, come in! Have a seat anywhere you'd like. There are some comfy couches up front here, or if you'd prefer to join the line to left, those are the folks lining up to run me out of this PepSi town any second now. Watch out for juney, there, I consider her armed and dangerous. Don't let that habit fool you (*whispers* she's not a real nun).

Okay? We're good now?

Thanks, pd, for stopping in and saying hi, and for your comments. Even if Pepa's having mushy feelings for someone else. I DO hope you stick around. *surreptitiously locks door* *smiles innocently*

[swiftlyreloaded]

ok ok I know this is going to sound repetitive, I can't REALLY this SUX.
NOT your writing but the idea Pepa falling for NOTsilvia seems SO wrong.
I say your doing a superb job w/ this fic & I think the slow pace of Pepa is endearing just difficult for a PepSi fan. Thank you for the care you've given to this fic & keep up the good work.

[elisa_trapt]

Thank you for the care you've given to this fic & keep up the good work.

Hey, swiftly, thank you. That means a lot to me. I really enjoyed writing this fic, but it was definitely hard too, and I've done my best to keep Pepa's integrity throughout. Just like all of you, believe me I'd much rather have Silvia than Marta (or whoever), but I had to give this a shot. I appreciate you sticking with me. :) A few more chapters to go!

[bsofthewest]

I see no reason why Pepa can't pine and dream of Silvia the rest of her life. I will. This "not Silvia" is going to ahve to prove herself to me and the rest of us...I'm not ready. Boy, now I'm grumpy!
(but you are a wonderful writer!)

[elisa_trapt]

Please don't be grumpy! She's a good person, I promise you. Give her a bit of a chance! I mean, Pepa deserves another shot at happiness, right? It'd be worse if she were all alone the rest of her life!

[bsofthewest]

Well, I'm still not over how perfect Pepa and Silvia were together. Like they were the best couple I have ever seen on screen. Best chemistry. Best love story. Hotter than otalia...almost hotter than Lena Headey kissing just about anybody. That 2 straight women could portray them is just wonderful to me.