Title: The First Time
Rating: Mild R
A/N: Don't have too much to say tonight. It's been a looong week, and a looong weekend. I love my friends dearly, but I wish they'd stop getting married for about 5 minutes so I (and my bank account) could take a breath. But at least the wedding this weekend ended happily, not tragically, since as far as I know,
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You have written, perhaps, the perfect paragraph:
"Because tonight, she had just woken up and thought Silvia was beside her. And for three seconds, for three fucking seconds, Pepa had been immeasurably, profoundly, perfectly happy. Because she knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that she could turn toward Silvia, put her arms around her, and the redhead would burrow into her, mouth open against the crook of her shoulder. If she were really lucky, Silvia would wake just enough to sigh contentedly and lean up for a lazy kiss, before falling immediately back to sleep. And Pepa, absurdly pleased, would hold her close, and have no trouble falling back to sleep either."
You know I am right!
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Argh, writing Pepa in these first few chapters was not fun. I mean, I love writing so in once sense it was, but in another I hated doing this stuff to her. Can you imagine, waking up and thinking Silvia was beside her? B/c she was all sleepy and disoriented. Good God.
Jeez, on second thought, maybe you SHOULD get a pitchfork and come after me....I think I'm depressing MYSELF!
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I am definitely curious as to how you'll handle the fuckeduppery that was S9. The LHdP writers made Pepa do a number of things in that season that made me actually dislike the character, and they never resolved them properly either.
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I feel rather emperor-like today. Did you notice?
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I, myself, of am sound mind. Go ahead. Test me!
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Looks like I failed the test before it was even given...
*slow tear drop, fade to black*
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Keep up the great and quick updates! :-)
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I do promise to eventually stop stomping on everyone's heart. Just...not today. Pepa's got a few more things to work through before she starts pulling out of this horrible place she's in.
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*sigh* (PepSi por siempre!)
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I don't know, why since i read your fic it reminds me of Shania Twains song: It Only Hurts When I'm Breathing. It is a really sad song. And the lyrics kinda fit on what Pepa is going through.
Thanks for the fast update. :) Can't wait for the next chap.
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I haven't heard that song, I don't think, but I do like Shania. I will have to go find it and listen to it now. But by the title alone, it does suggest some of what Pepa's going through. I consider it somewhat of a miracle that she's breathing at all.
Thanks for the comment!
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It's really a ngood song but really sad. I hope you'll like it when you heard of it.
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And I just listened to the song - ouch. Really pretty song, but ouch. You're right - that's very much Pepa right now. :( (Incidentally, I see it's from the album "Up" which I OWN. Clearly, I haven't listened to it very much!)
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But first, I must read forward... then maybe use my pitchfork. *nods*
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Sheesh, juney. Four chapters and you're already turning violent....
I'm gonna have to call security. Except I suspect they're actually in supercontenta's employ. And she's not so happy w/ me right now. Steal a girl's crown and she gets so snippy....
But listen, you just back up nice and slowly with that pointy thing....
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