The Found Letter somewhat edited

[elinka_nano]

The Found Letter

Mark’s thoughts of his happy future interrupted, he knew he was lost.

“Lost, I am positively lost.” Saying it aloud, Mark couldn’t keep himself from smiling in spite of being unable to see the dirt road leading to the train station. He’d taken his chances leaving Masha’s parents’ dacha so late at

Comments

[angerona]

interesting idea, but it could use some work, true :) (too many comas in the first half, but either it got better, or I got too absorbed with the story to notice later on :).

Very sad to read (and write) about that time, because no matter what you say, you know the future is bleak for your characters.

[elinka]

Thanks!

I usually need some time before I can go back and edit, otherwise, the text just grows on me and I can't see any mistakes or logical errors. Now that there is a deadline, I will have to fix it :-).