Drawing a line
Title: Drawing a line
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Summary: Drawing is Donghae's obsession. And for Hyukjae it's unbelievably fascinating.
A/N: Just a short one because I don't have much time. Enjoy reading!
( I love watching you draw. The concentrated expression on your face, wrinkles formed between your eyebrows, head tilted to the side and tongue sticked out a little. Your hand moving across the paper, shading the lines, smudging it with fingertips. The way you hum a random melody. How you don't care about things around you. How you're lost in your obsession. )
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
Summary: Drawing is Donghae's obsession. And for Hyukjae it's unbelievably fascinating.
A/N: Just a short one because I don't have much time. Enjoy reading!
( I love watching you draw. The concentrated expression on your face, wrinkles formed between your eyebrows, head tilted to the side and tongue sticked out a little. Your hand moving across the paper, shading the lines, smudging it with fingertips. The way you hum a random melody. How you don't care about things around you. How you're lost in your obsession. )
HOLY FREAKING SHISUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG I DO NOT KNOW HOW YOU ARE GOING TO READ ALL OF THIS THAT I AM ABOUT TO POST HERE. I DON'T KNWO. GOSH.
*GLOMPS YOU*
*RUNS OVER TO SLOVAKIA, FINDS YOU AND THROWS MYSELF ON YOU*
OMGOMGOMOGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!I THINK I DIED SERIOUSLY I AM SO DEAD LIKE YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE. OKAY WELL FIRST THINS FIRST!
YAY SPOT!!!!!!!!!! *DANCES AROUND IN SPOT*
YOU HAVE GREEN EYES O= *GLOMPS YOU WITH EUNHAE AND AND AND GOOD STUFF*
AND OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope the snow leaves soon because it sounds like you just hate it and if I could I would take it away and make sure it never bothered you again bb <3
And i don't know what you are talking about because I think I am in love with you! like seriously!!!!
This one shot was so freaking romantic and awesome and i think i died multiple times and I am never coming back because I am floating away in a cloud of happy Eunhae love. And omg you write so well
*sobs*
I love your fics and I like the new layout anf I lvoe you <33333333333333333333333333333333333333
And this comment is going really long and I haven't even gotten to the fic yet so I am going to post this and then go back and quote my favorite parts and tell you why you're so awesome and gosh I just want to take this and show it to everyone because this is just like a FREAKING WORK OF ART!!!!!!!!
WORK OF ART
I can't even begin to explain to you how talented and awesome you are and don't worry about not posting more often because when you do post it is so beautiful and it feels like a treat and it is a privilege to read it and OMG thank you so much for posting and sharing!!!!!!!!!!
*hugs you*
You write so well and this was perfect and dsjhfdwljkshflkdsjhflkjdshkalj
okay let me go and comment on the fic now. Oh gosh just know that this was perfect.
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*locks all windows and stands in front of you protectively*
You can't jump out that window!!!!!!!!!! I won't let you!!! I need you!!!!!
You were sitting on the bench opposite me, your head tilted down, bangs falling into your eyes as you were focusing on the paper and drawing something. Your hands were unprotected and you were just sitting there calmly, concentrating on your drawing, not even bothering with bitter wind. You seemed so weirdly interesting to me.
HOLY FUCK Damn it! Excuse the cursing. *washes mouth out with soap* I am in love with that whole thing. I can't even tell you. I love it! I love the way you describe it. I love how Hyukkie is watching Hae. I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*flails madly*
OMG! *sobs* You write so well. *hangs head in shame* I am nothing compared to you. Honestly. Everything I have ever written seems so blah when I read what you write. I wish to write like you.
*glomps you*
"How you do it?" I ask once I'm back in reality. "Where do you get inspiration?"
"Well, from many different things. From imagination. Nature. By watching fire, clouds or stars in the sky. And sometimes it comes just out of the blue."
"You always draw just Nature." I realize as I leaf through all of your drawings in my head.
"Yes, I do. Because what more than Nature can we have? All of the things, Nature is the most precious being ever." you look deep into my eyes. "You know, when I start drawing an ordinary thing, I realize how extraordinary it is. And if you can see beauty in everything then you are an artist. I can't imaginate my life without drawing. I've been drawing all my life." you say preoccupied in your own thoughts, searching for the right words to say.
"Teach me."
HOLY SHIT Why is this so beautiful??????? ;_; why are you so good? Why do you make me want to melt into a useless puddle of goo. I think this is the most romantic and possibly best things I have ever read. I can so picture this happening. I love your Eunhae. I love your Eunahae. I LOVE YOUR EUNHAE!!!!!!!!! Omg bb teach me to write like you. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I stare at you again as I'm trying to be serious and notice it's here again. You leaved to your own world far away from here. You seem so content that it makes me wonder how does it look like there, in the little world of yours. And then my heart starts pounding in my chest crazily because I realize how incredibly special and intimate this moment is. Because I realize that I'm practically exposing my naked body to you. Offering myself to you. And suddenly I know that there's nobody else I want to ever expose myself to. Just you. It will always be just you.
Melts into a puddle of goo*
*dies*
I am in love with this fic. Holy mother of sweetness!!!!! I am going to mem this and and and share it. Can I share? Can I make everyone I know read it??? Will you give me permission to drag everyone I know over here and making them read it? OMG PEOPLE NEED TO READ THIS. They NEED to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG bb just take your whole fic and put it here in this comment because it was just the best thing in the entire universe. HOly mother of SHIT I AM GOING TO CURSE NOW. FUCKING HELL GIRL THIS WAS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE FUCKING LIFE! I never curse okay just so you know (I have cursed four times in the past four months okay). That I am cursing here means that your fic is just the BEST STUFF ON EARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I don't I did enough justice to you before. I think I need to tell you exactly how much I love this.
You know how you always tell me that your leg is shaking and things like that. Well, my leg wouldn't stop shaking while I was reading this and it won't stop shaking now and I don't even know what to tell you. Because HOLY SHIT this was sooooooooooooooooooo good like you would not believe.
I am fangirling so hard over here. I can't even put words to it. Seriously. OMG I am such a dork and I am spamming you with the weirdest SHIT but I just need you to understand how awesome this is and how great and perfect and OMG I love this. LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I...wow...okay I should probably be quiet and leave you alone and yeah but I can't because this was so perfect and awesome and I am flailing so hard and dying and melting into mush. And I am so happy that I read this and omg how do I even tell you how great this is. I can't explain it in words and I don't even know anymore. but look at this. Look at what your fic has done to me. I am so incoherent it's not even funny. OMG.
Okay, okay let me just say that I have memmmed two fics since I joined livejournal and both of them are yours.<33333333333
I love your fics. I love you. Okay I'll leave you alone now before you think I'm crazy just know that I will be re-reading this fic forever seriously. FOREVER!!!!!!!!
Okay so I'm going to leave you alone now.
Bye.
I love you.
*leaves*
*comes back*
*hugs you*
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"Let's make love tonight." I breathe out after staring at you for God knows how long.
I keep rereading and finding the best things here and I need to come and comment on them. This right there made my heart jump all over the place. OMG it is so sweet and romantic and I am crying because this is so good and I will never be this good and your writing makes me want to hug you and kiss you and squish you until you can't breathe and okay I'll be quiet now.
You don't leave any part of my body unkissed, untouched, unloved. Your hands are rough from the hard work and it's such a contrast against my smooth skin but the touch is deep, full of love and feelings. And then finally two bodies are moving in unison, in synchronous rhythm.
You're not making love to me expertly, mechanically, coldly. The way you do it thrill my heart, takes my soul away and arouses my senses. It's all about what we feel inside. It's a poetry in motion. Speak of love.
WHY???????? I AM TEARING AND CRYING AND FLAILING AND DYING ALL OVER AGAIN BECAUSE IT WAS SO AWESOME AND THIS WAS PERFECT AND AND AND THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE HAS NO WORDS WHATSOEVER TO DESCRIBE WHAT THIS IS. I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW PERFECT THIS IS AND I AM GOING TO SCARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND WHEN YOU READ ALL OF THIS AND I AM SORRY FOR BEING ALL FLAILY AND YEAH...
*walks away*
*comes back*
Just one more thing.
This night is made just for us. So let's take this night for loving. And make it last till morning. Although I know when I wake up you'll draw to infinity but it's okay because like you said, you can't live without drawing and I accept it. For now let's just end tonight with those three sweet words. 'I love you.
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG BB THIS IS SO GREAT AND PERFECT AND I AM A HUGE FAN AND I AM CRAZY BUT I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU AND I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LET ME READ IT AND YOU'RE LETTING EVERYONE READ IT AND THANKS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
AND I WANT TO PRINT THIS AND FRAME IT AND I WOULD IF MY ROOMMATE WEREN'T SO DAMN DELICATE ABOUT CERTAIN THINGS! AND MAY I PLEASE COPY THIS AND CARRY IT AROUND WITH ME??????? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*shuts up*
*walks away*
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I SWEAR YOU'RE NOT ANNOYING! AT AL!!!
YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER TOO AND I'M SAYING FREAKIN TRUTH!
I WANT TO KISS YOU TO DEATH!!! AND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THAT I CAN'T DESCRIBE IT IN WORDS!
You can print it. You can do whatever you want because you are super awesome and I want to be literally sticked to you for the rest of my life!
THANK YOU SO FREAKIN MUCH FOR YOUR AMAZING COMMENTS WHICJ MAKE ME HAPPY SO MUCH!
IMMA KIDNAP YOU AND KEEP YOU FOR MYSELF!
♥ ♥ ♥
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and so yeah I have that story all over the place now and i am so happy and woahs imma calm down and not really because I am going to go back and read this again and go crazy all over again and again and again.
and yeah =)
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It's a poetry in motion. Speak of love.
HOLY SHIT FUCKING HELL That line is just perfect. OMG When has smex been described like that? When???????????
OMG I CANNOT EVEN. I LOVE THAT PART RIGHT THERE. OMG OMG!!!!!!!! SHIT! DO NOT EVER DOUBT YOURSELF EVER AGAIN!!!!!! EVER!!! that is just so perfect it makes me want to cry. I love that description. I love it. OK I'll go and do my homework and study like I am supposed to be doing.
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!
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Thank you very kamsa!!!
THAT'S HOW EUNHAE ARE HAVING SMEX, BB!
Imma reply to the comments and then read Things Happen! ^^
Yeah, tell me something about studying. T__T
I LOVE YOU MORE!!!
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I love leg shaking! Leg shaking is awesome! I want to marry leg shaking!
I WANT TO MARRY YOU!!! <333
You seriously like it that much? You can spam me! YOU CAN DO ANYTHING YOU WANT BECAUSE I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!
No, don't leave me alone. Please!
I NEED YOU! I WANT YOU!!!
I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS SO FREAKIN MUCH!!!
I LOVE YOU FOR MEMMING MY FICS! I'M SO THANKFUL TO YOU! AND I DON'T DESERVES IT! AT ALL!!!
I LOVE YOU TOO! FOREVER!
*hugs you back*
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SO I TOOK SO LONG TO FINISH THIS COMMENT BECAUSE MY ROOMMATE LOST SOMETHING BUT BLAH SO YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOUR COMMENT MADE ME GIGGLE AND BLUSH AND GEEZ I LOVES YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU TOTALLY DESERVE IT!!!
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I'm fine with cursing. Just curse how much you want. I curse all the time.
You think you're nothing? OMG, don't say such words anymore!!! *o*
YOUR FICS ARE FUCKING AWESOME AND YOU HAVE TO KNOW IT! I FREAKIN MEAN IT!
Am I that good? I don't believe that! Girl, you're overacting.
I really don't think I'm that awesome. I have poor English vocabulary and...
ANYWAY, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I'm think I'm going to say it lots of times.
I AM SO IN LOVE WITH YOU!!!
Yes, you can share. I don't mind.
SERIOUSLY GIRL, ARE YOU ON SUGAR?
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like seriously. I WAS OKAY AND THEN YOUR FIC DID THAT TO ME. I HAVEN'T HAD ANY SUGAR IN DAYS!!!!!!! AND OMG PSHHHHHHHHHHHH WHATEVER THE LITTLE TINY ITSY BITSY TEENY GRAMMAR MISTAKES ARE NEVER EVEN NOTICEABLE OKAY. YOU CAN'T TELL BECAUSE THE WHOLE FIC IS SO FUCKING AWESOME THAT WHO EVEN NOTICES THAT. I LOVE THIS FIC AND
I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!! MARRY ME!!!!!!!! LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!
I AM NOT OVERRREACTING. YOU ARE UNDER REACTING. YEAH THAT'S IT. BECAUSE THIS WAS JUST SO FREAKING AMAZING LIKE YOU WOULD NOT BELIEVE.
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GIRL, YOU ARE FREAKIN CRAZY! YOU KNOW IT?
MY HEART IS OVERFLOWING WITH LOVE RIGHT NOW!
I LOVE YOU LIKE NOBODY ELSE IN THIS WORLD!!!
I WANT YOU HERE WITH ME! NOW!
JUST WRITE AND WRITE, I DON'T MIND AS LONG AS IT'S YOU.
Yes, I have green eyes and I don't like the color green. Oh my gee thank you for glomping me with Eunhae! ^^
Snow is really bothering me but I can't do anything with it.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY BECAUSE WHEN I SAY JUST THANK YOU IT'S NOT ENOUGH!
OMG, THANK YOU SO FUCKING MUCH, I WILL LOVE YOU FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE!
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WORK OF ART YOU SAY?
I SO DON'T DESERVE THOSE BEAUTIFUL WORDS YOU WROTE!
DON'T BE SO GOOD TO ME OR I'LL COME AND RAPE YOU BABY! *o*
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! <3333333333333333333333333
*hugs and never let you go*
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*HUGS YOU TOO AND NEVER LETS GO EITHER*
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