(Ahaha. Sly witch is sly.) He may or may not be buying the act.
Tumney North- is it a name for a district, then? I was thinking more along the lines that Tumney was the street, but it crossed two bridges. Whatevs, I felt like a proper noun was required in these matters.
The hook veered sharply upwards, as if it has hit something (Tense disagreement. Also, does the hook fly through another window, or over the top of the wall entirely?) Typo, not tense disagreement. =P (The rope went through, up, then back over. Flying in 180 degree opposite direction! Possibly I misunderstood the wall. Meh.)
If you had stood elsewhere, you might have ended up there, (I'm a little confused at her meaning, here.) Probably so is everybody else and ignoring her. (Basically her logic was- if the hook is aimed to fall directly on him, he will then move and not be hit! But if the hook is not aimed directly at him and he moves, then he could be hit!)
The extra gates can be left out for simplicty, they're not important, but up-page a bit the statue was staring at a gate. Also, the fourth entranceway here is technically an exit-way, no? Whoops, forgot to give that gate the boot when I went 'who the hell cares, gates were there for time-consumption, not plot' and erased them all. (Also, four entrances to the room. One simply happens to be the exit for the building.)
“Fish regularly move their bowels in rivers. And still people constantly splash naked in them. How is this any different?” (Ahahaha. Drog is awesome.) It struck me as the perfect line for him. (Also, everybody else's varying degrees of 'oh god, I just vomited in my mouth' looks. I crack me up.)
The man’s struggles finally succeeding in landing an elbow in Drog’s injured side
See, Lorak's line is why I don't like being in water. Even though I do love being in water. River water is *nasty*. (It's a wonder it flows at all, the sheer amount of avian/piscine/reptilian feces in it.)
He may or may not be buying the act.
Tumney North- is it a name for a district, then?
I was thinking more along the lines that Tumney was the street, but it crossed two bridges. Whatevs, I felt like a proper noun was required in these matters.
The hook veered sharply upwards, as if it has hit something
(Tense disagreement. Also, does the hook fly through another window, or over the top of the wall entirely?)
Typo, not tense disagreement. =P (The rope went through, up, then back over. Flying in 180 degree opposite direction! Possibly I misunderstood the wall. Meh.)
If you had stood elsewhere, you might have ended up there,
(I'm a little confused at her meaning, here.)
Probably so is everybody else and ignoring her. (Basically her logic was- if the hook is aimed to fall directly on him, he will then move and not be hit! But if the hook is not aimed directly at him and he moves, then he could be hit!)
The extra gates can be left out for simplicty, they're not important, but up-page a bit the statue was staring at a gate. Also, the fourth entranceway here is technically an exit-way, no?
Whoops, forgot to give that gate the boot when I went 'who the hell cares, gates were there for time-consumption, not plot' and erased them all. (Also, four entrances to the room. One simply happens to be the exit for the building.)
“Fish regularly move their bowels in rivers. And still people constantly splash naked in them. How is this any different?”
(Ahahaha. Drog is awesome.)
It struck me as the perfect line for him. (Also, everybody else's varying degrees of 'oh god, I just vomited in my mouth' looks. I crack me up.)
The man’s struggles finally succeeding in landing an elbow in Drog’s injured side
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Fish poop isn't so bad, actually. It's the turtle poop that should really gross people out.
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