Only the darkest magic could withstand the power of the son god’s priests’ cleansing spells (comma?) and no one wanted to chance one of the cursed items waking out of the stasis the priests had managed to place them in.
Her feet, he noticed, were completely shadowed and moving slowly up her legs. (Tae has remarkable feet!)
Meh, commas could go either way with and. I could probably split it into two sentences. My sentences tend to run un. Though thanks for pointing out the sentence. Son god indeed.
I'm enjoying all the little updates. I always love seeing a story's protagonists through another character's eyes, and you packed a ton of new little world-building flavor bits into this. It's story-licious!
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Only the darkest magic could withstand the power of the son god’s priests’ cleansing spells (comma?) and no one wanted to chance one of the cursed items waking out of the stasis the priests had managed to place them in.
Her feet, he noticed, were completely shadowed and moving slowly up her legs.
(Tae has remarkable feet!)
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