Thi isn't me...

[elfbert]

...as most of you know, I don't normally 'do' het. I used to, but grew out of it at about 14, when I realised I wasn't a total weirdo for wanting to see the boys getting it on far more than the boys-and-girls getting it on XD

But the evil that was the PornFest made me write this...

Clearly the word pornfest should give you an idea on the rating...

The

Comments

[hambelandjemima]

How dare they make you write 'het'? How bloody dare they?

I'm glad you did, because this was pretty hot and Ray being so docile was a joy to behold :D

Porntastic!

[elfbert]

Well...no one held a gun against my head...but I decided to flex my het writing muscles, which really have atrophied. I do like a challenge though, and this was one!

[hambelandjemima]

Well, I think you rose (oo-err missus!) to the challenge admirably.

I've often wondered though (and this is slightly OT) how you can still look Deano in the face after you've written things like this about him. It's not a criticism btw, far from it. I'm just curious. :)

[elfbert]

I'll admit it's a *little* difficult when I met Deano on set, because he was dressed as Ray, and did the occasional bit of 'Ray' at us XD But otherwise, Deano and Ray are so very different that it's very easy to separate the two. I really don't see Ray in Deano much at all. Which is lucky. I think Marsh is a little more like Chris - if only because he is quite shy and very very adorable...but there's still a clear difference.

I can't imagine how hard it would be if they were like their characters...

[angeweeks]

Ngggggggggggggggh.

*asplodes*

This is a recorded message on behalf of Ange's brain. She's unable to be more coherent right now after reading teh hotness. She apologises for the technical hitch at this time.

[elfbert]

Heheee...hope you fix the technical hitch by the time you need your brain again XD

[saintvic]

Oh yes - this was extremely hot and thank you for writing one of my prompts. Love how you have shown Annie as aggressive and determined. I actually find it quite easy to see her that way and Ray's sense of bewilderment is great.

[elfbert]

And now I've read this comment I see you did XD

I figure Annie has to be pretty determined, to have got into CID and stuck it out. Plus what's Ray gonna do about it? ;)

[saintvic]

Yes I did love this and the way you wrote it meant I could actually picture it very clearly in my mind> I don't think you mary-sued it at all. There is a real sense of immediacy and action that make it seem in the moment and that it fits the characters.

Thank you again.

: )

[time_testudinem]

Just a perfect little piece of porn. There is a lot of sex in fan writing, but not much of it works for me on that true porn level. This... definitely hit that spot. (and will probably continue to do so many times over)

Loved Ray's complete bewilderment, yet he is willing, because, hey, sex!

[basaltgrrl]

Just taking a look at rec weeks from the past, and I found *this* little gem of a fic... AMAZING! Although it seems unlikely to ever occur in canon, I absolutely believed in both of them here. The sex is super hot, and man, I really do believe in dominant!Annie!