fic: everytime i look at you

Nov 25, 2010 14:17



title: everytime i look at you
rating: pg
pairings/characters: xabi alonso, steven gerrard, iker casillias
disclaimer: this story is complete fiction. especially the parts about law/being a lawyer and the univeristy structure/lifestyle in spain but especially the relationship between these footballers.
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theosakansun November 25 2010, 05:58:11 UTC
Oh my god. OH MY GOD.

Seriously, all of this...it's just flawless and perfect! It's just something about this that's so incredibly beautiful and poetic.

So, Xabi was in love with Iker when he lived in Spain, right? And Iker did not notice it to start with, and didn't have any feelings for Xabi either. I can be wrong, but Iker fell for Xabi, didn't he? Like, when he said

"at the bar, xabi relays the drinks when iker says, 'this is not what i expected.'"

but also this

iker puts out a hand to stop him, fingertips resting briefly on the back of his hand, before he pulls out a couple of notes from his pocket and pays the bartender. 'that's not what i meant.'

and the second time when Iker comes to visit, he says this

"outside the restaurant they hug, he feels iker's hand cup the back of his neck, pulling him closer he whispers, 'i think you're making a terrible mistake.' just as suddenly he pulls away to flag down a taxi, doesn't look at xabi until he opens the door and says, 'probably shouldn't keep him waiting.'"

which is basically him admitting that he's been in love with Xabi for years and years and thinks Xabi should have picked him!

The Xabi/Stevie part of this was very cute, and I love how you made Stevie propose to Xabi :)

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eleventy9 November 26 2010, 00:07:57 UTC
THANK YOU!! i'm so glad you liked it!

i love your breakdown and interpretation of iker. he's a tricky character to try to pin down but i can yes, xabi was in love with iker in spain.

i kinda love that proposal a lot too :)

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