My first poem entry
Just came to me last night
"Inner Twitch"
Endless thoughts repeating,
In the inner depths of my mind.
Echoing solely without meaning,
The words to describe them I cannot find.
All the mystery and pain I seem to bear
Is starting to grip me and take its toll.
Seamingly tearing and ripping with out a care.
Bekoning to claw at my fragile soul.
Every time I stand up to this omnipresent force
I am only pushed away.
A new strategy comes to mind and starts to take its course.
I will make myself stronger and fight another day.
My mind and body starts to tingle, wince, and itch.
Will there ever be a cure for my Inner Twitch?
I was also thinking of transforming it a little someday into a song, something that you could see a band like Linkin Park play. This was done in an english sonnet style, abab cdcd efef gg....it is a pretty common rhyme meter, and I think it works well. After talking about meter in AP english class, thought I'd try it out.
"Inner Twitch"
Endless thoughts repeating,
In the inner depths of my mind.
Echoing solely without meaning,
The words to describe them I cannot find.
All the mystery and pain I seem to bear
Is starting to grip me and take its toll.
Seamingly tearing and ripping with out a care.
Bekoning to claw at my fragile soul.
Every time I stand up to this omnipresent force
I am only pushed away.
A new strategy comes to mind and starts to take its course.
I will make myself stronger and fight another day.
My mind and body starts to tingle, wince, and itch.
Will there ever be a cure for my Inner Twitch?
I was also thinking of transforming it a little someday into a song, something that you could see a band like Linkin Park play. This was done in an english sonnet style, abab cdcd efef gg....it is a pretty common rhyme meter, and I think it works well. After talking about meter in AP english class, thought I'd try it out.